Love Me, My Brother!

Fandom: Naruto

Genre: Humor/Romance/Drama

Rating: T/15+

Pairing/Characters: Main SasuNaru, others in later chapters/ all characters hopefully are here

Summary: Sasuke and Naruto are mortal enemies and rivals in their high school. However, 'things' happen when their single parent decided to marry each other! Now they're forced to live under the same roof! Will their feeling change into brotherly love or…more than that?

A/N: Okay, I rewrote this story after it was mercilessly deleted by FF net admin because of the T-rated summary (seriously? It is). I edited the old file and added a LOT of things, and removed some things that aren't useful or confusing to the readers so this story will make sense better than the previous one. Well, the plot is almost the same though, only more sensible. I'll try to re-write it as interesting as possible.

This is an AU story where Naruto and friends are in highs school in modern era. Hope this story will interest you to read and enjoy it till the end ^_^.

Disclaimer: Naruto and its characters are Kishimoto-sensei's children. Luna only borrows the characters to play with

Warning: AU, foul language, shounen ai—yaoi (SasuNaru and the others), violence, possible oOC and gangster things… Oh, and because this is self-beta, you might find grammars and spelling errors, but I hope it won't be too many…

Prologue: Marriage

"Wait a damn sec, you-Teme—, that's my pasta bread! Give it back!" Uzumaki Naruto, a hot, spiky blond haired with three scars resembling whiskers on each cheek and wore untidy black Gakuran (1), yelled at a raven haired boy with white Gakuran.

The said raven was in the middle of paying for the bread in his hand in a canteen of their school. Naruto mercilessly pointed his forefinger at the raven white seething, sending a deadly glare which was totally ignored by the stoic boy in front of him.

"What are you saying, Dobe? I pay for it, so it's mine," Uchiha Sasuke said with a cool expression, seemingly very nonchalant about the boisterous accusation he was facing.

Then, in the background behind the two boys were the girls and a few boys, squealing at Sasuke with heart-shaped pupils in their eyes. In comparison, somehow they also looked obviously murderous at Naruto.

Asshole!—Naruto thought, very much irked at the display of discrimination by their schoolmates and generally at Sasuke's bored response and ignorance.

"I found it first!" Naruto yelled stubbornly, determined to rile Sasuke up no matter what.

"There's no point on finding without taking and paying, you moron," Sasuke insulted, of course with that super annoying arrogant face. Moreover, that smirk… oh how Naruto wanted to rip his face apart just so he could wipe that condescending smirk off of his expression.

"You-ass—!" Naruto decided to throw the first punch at the conceited Uchiha when Sasuke's fans club hurriedly gathered between the two boys to prevent Naruto violating their dear prince charming Sasuke.

Ugh, gross!—Naruto almost hurl at the thought of Sasuke as Prince Charming.

"Don't you dare lay a finger on our Sasuke-kun, you-outcast!" Haruno Sakura, a pink haired girl who was leading Sasuke's Fans Club cracked her knuckles fearsomely, making Naruto gulp nervously as he noticed a tale-tale of violence on the tip of her fist and tongue.

Damn! And she's cute too!—Naruto lamented inwardly. He had a crush on her before, but she obviously only had eyes for Sasuke, so he didn't pursue his one-sided attraction anymore, especially when she already considered him as a nemesis just because he HATED Uchiha Sasuke. Damn that bastard!

"Yeah, or we will beat the shit out of you!" Yamanaka Ino, the blond haired girl beside Sakura –she was the vice president of Sasuke's Fans Club, by the way– added while threatening him with a dagger glare as well.

Ugh!—Naruto actually wondered why Sasuke was very popular among girls. Although it might have something to do with his face (such girly face too!), but his personality SUCKED big time. Such nature wasn't supposed to be allowed to exist in humanity, damn it!

Actually, Naruto was pretty much irritated at those moronic fans (how come they were so easily duped by the raven was beyond him), but he didn't want to hit girls. Even if he was a leader of a certain gang, he forbade himself to hit the weaklings. That was his code and principle that he wouldn't break no matter what. So he tried to suppress his anger hard, so he wouldn't explode at them as well.

The guys (also Sasuke's fans, whom Naruto suspected to be gay for Sasuke) were another thing, though. He would kick their asses later for daring to insult Naruto with those name-callings. Naruto also had a pride to hold as a leader of a gang, damn it!

But then, a light bulb flickered in Naruto's head. "Huh, the mighty Uchiha Sasuke is a weakling who can only hide behind his fans when someone challenges him to a fight. Definitely a cowa~rd," Naruto sang a self-made-song, smirking evilly to insult the pride of an Uchiha, which according to his knowledge was more important than his (Uchiha's) life itself.

Sasuke's eyebrow visibly twitched when he heard that. "Just now… what did you say…?" Sasuke asked, voice tone eerily low, his aura darkening, his long bangs creating creepy shadow on his face, adding the dark look he already possessed even without feeling pissed off.

Naruto realized fully that his provocation was working. "I said you're a weakling! A coward!" the blonde's smirk widened, bit by bit undoing Sasuke's temper.

"You bastard—!" Sasuke finally lost it, and yelled "Move away!" at his fans, before suddenly jumping Naruto to hit him.

Then… blows of exchanged kicks and punches between Sasuke and Naruto exploded again at the canteen in the center building of Konoha Private High School.

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Konoha Academy was the biggest private high school in Konoha City. It was built up a hill in the center of the city with three buildings as the main areas complemented with two gyms, a swimming pool facility, a tennis court, a baseball/soccer field, and two big halls for school events. The main buildings consisted of West Building, East Building and Center Building. Each building had its own certain functions. Both West and East buildings were used as classrooms for the students, while the Center Building hosted the teacher's offices, the head master's office and some miscellaneous rooms for the students' organization and extracurricular activities.

Konoha Academy used two kinds of Gakurans: black Gakuran for the students whose classes were located at the East Building and white Gakuran for the students studying in the West Building.

Huh? Why were there two Gakurans?

Well, it was because there were two types of students in Konoha Academy: the trouble makers and the strictly-rule-oriented good kids. The trouble makers, like Naruto and Gaara, for examples, wore black Gakurans because they wanted to (free spirit, yeah), and black suited them more than white (they claimed) anyway. White Gakuran suited the prodigies and the smart bookworms, like Sasuke and Neji more (although they would make your life a living hell if you called them bookworms).

Those black and white uniformed students had separate classes too. White uniform studied in West Building while black uniform was in East Building. The only time they mingled together were when it was their club activities, which was dominated by the whites since most the blacks either didn't like to crowd or was just plain lazy to do extra activities after school. Well, most of the blacks hung out together in small groups sometimes, once in awhile harassing the whites.

In short, East Building and West Building students never got along with each other. They bickered and fought most of the time when they met. That's why there was a boss for each building to control their actions, purposely to keep the school in order.

Uzumaki Naruto was the boss of East Building since he was very strong and good at fighting (and somehow, trouble makers found him charismatic and street-smart that they were willing to follow him), while Uchiha Sasuke led the West Building students. In addition, Sasuke doubled as the Student Council's President of Konoha Academy as well since he was ridiculously smart and athletic to boot. Plus, he was a master of political organization and was very loved by the teachers for never breaking school rules (the git). In short, Sasuke was the elitist amongst the elite students that wore white Gakuran.

Naruto hated Sasuke for that.

Obviously, the two bosses didn't get along with each other as well. They even claimed to be mortal nemesis. Their personality was like fire and water, cat and dog, sky and earth (you named it) and they always fought over any reason (no matter how petty it is) they could come up with.

It didn't matter how elite Sasuke was or how outcast Naruto was, the two of them just loved to harass each other (and their followers rooted them for it). In other word, this school was a synonym of a mess itself.

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"Haaah, this is again…, how troublesome," Nara Shikamaru, a brunet whose hair was tied high in pony tail, wearing black Gakuran, let out a long suffering sigh with a bored looking face from the table.

"Good! Punch him in his face, Naruto! Aaah, almost! No, your back! Kick there!" Inuzuka Kiba, a spiky black haired boy, who was also in black Gakuran and had fangs like a dog (and he always brought his white puppy, Akamaru) shouted, rooting for Naruto excitedly in the uproar when Sasuke and Naruto were fighting.

"Aaah, stop him, Gaara," Sikamaru whined at an expressionless, shorter, red haired boy who had a tattoo of Kanji 'love' on his forehead. Of course he wore the same colored Gakuran as Shikamaru and Kiba as well.

Sunano Gaara merely stared at the heated fight silently for a few more minutes before he stood from his seat and headed to Naruto and Sasuke in the middle of the already disarrayed canteen.

"Shino, stop Sasuke now!" Hyuuga Neji, a beautiful pale-skinned boy who had long smooth black hair in white Gakuran, shouted at another male, his friend, Aburame Shino, a taller boy whose hair was spiky, short and black. Shino wore sunglasses and dressed in the same Gakuran as Neji and Sasuke. However, the collar of his uniform was much higher than the others. It reached up until it covered his lower face.

Shino was just as silent as Gaara when he approached the violence. His slightly covered face (courtesy of his sunglasses and his high collar) made people difficult to see his expression, but others regarded him as a very calm and rational boy nonetheless (strong too, since he was in executive committee).

While Sasuke and Naruto were still doing a number on each other viciously and mercilessly, Gaara and Shino suddenly cut their connection with a chop on their respective heads, effectively stopping them from moving further to hurt each other.

"Stop it, Uzumaki. You make a mess of the canteen and bother us," Gaara said while looking down at the blond coldly. Naruto seemed stunned at that.

"Uchiha, stop it already. Remember, you're the president of student council. It will not be a good example for the others, fighting in such place," Shino reminded with cool voice too. Sasuke looked at him with a dumfounded expression.

Both Sasuke and Naruto were shocked for a moment before they noticed each other's presence and growled, thrusting out their tongues at each other with angry childish expression.

They act like five year old….

The others students thought in unison, sweat dropping as Shino pulled Sasuke away from Naruto and Gaara did the same to Naruto who was still struggling because he seemed still dissatisfied before killing the object of his frustration.

~Sasuke x Naruto~

—Later in Naruto's class, 1-D, at the East Building—

"Damn, that Sasuke-bastard! Pisses me off so much! That arrogant, selfish ice-prick! And the most annoying thing is: he thinks he's the fucking smartest, hottest person in the surface of earth! His annoying fans club doesn't help by making his ego grows to the size of the fucking moon too! Someone should kill all of them!" Naruto grumbled and grunted at no one in particular, actually. He just need to curse, insult and name-call Sasuke in undertone so he could feel better. But alas, somehow he was growing increasingly angry with each word.

Naruto's gang members looked at him ridiculously.

"Maa, maa, calm down, boss, we can easily ambush him in his way home and beat the shit out of him together," Sunano Kankuro, Gaara's elder brother who was at second year (and also one of Naruto's gang members) drawled lazily in evil smirk.

Naruto visibly twitched as he heard the suggestion. He turned his face and narrowed his eyes at the older boy whose face was painted rather interestingly with red lines which ran from below his eyes to above his chin.

Slowly standing and then walking approaching the said second year, Naruto reached out and grabbed Kankuro's collar, yanking it forward harshly. "Don't you dare suggest me to beat him with such dirty trick, Kankuro!" the blond hissed at him, not even bothering to address the older boy with senpai.

"There's no point in kicking Sasuke's ass if he doesn't even acknowledge his defeat! I'll make that prideful bastard kneel down before me and cry, begging for my mercy in one on one fight, damn it!" Naruto shoved the sweating Kankuro back to his seat and then snapped when he seemed to remember something. He turned around and walked away from the stunned out classmates.

"Where are you going, Naruto?" Kiba called him when he realized that Naruto was getting out of the class.

"Infirmary, I have to treat these stupid wounds before Iruka-sensei's class starts. He will give me a detention if he knows I fought again," Naruto said before sliding the door closed. A hint of blush stained his bruised cheeks from Sasuke's hard punches.

…

…

"Man… do you see his face? Even though he is our boss, why does he have a decency to worry about getting detention from Sensei to that extent?" Temari, Gaara's elder sister from third year asked while shaking her head.

"He doesn't suit this position at all. East Building is a place for extraordinary people with abnormal personality like us; cruel and unmerciful to anyone. Still, why did we choose him to be our leader again…?" Kankuro followed, asking while sighing in defeat as well.

"Simple. We fell for his personality," Gaara smirked slightly. Temari, Kankuro and Kiba stared at the redhead as if he had lost his head.

"Sappy much?" Shikamaru yawned and Gaara kicked his shin for that involuntary insult.

Though, despite whining while nursing his abused foot, Shikamaru could still fall asleep on his desk within three minutes after his head hit the surface. He even snored to announce his withdrawal from the living world to the la-la land.

"That lazy ass…," Kiba rolled his eyes, face faulting, and sweat dropping from the others' faces as well in response to that.

~Sasuke x Naruto~

"Ouch, can you please be gentler?" Sasuke scowled rather tensely at the infirmary doctor, Tsunade, a very beautiful, busty blond middle age woman with an appearance of twenty year old, who was currently treating his wounds.

"Shut up brat! It's your own damn fault for fighting in canteen with another student! Jeez—, you're supposed to be a leader, a Student Council's President! What in the world were you thinking, fighting so brutally like that?" Tsunade asked, or more like scolding him, jabbing disinfected cotton on Sasuke's tender flesh on his upper arm, sounding totally annoyed.

"The boss of East Building started it! That total-moron Naruto, the stupid looking blonde who thinks he's the strongest, sexiest guy in the world! He dared to insult my pride! An Uchiha, damn it!" Sasuke actually complained, totally infuriated.

"What did you say—?!"

Sasuke snapped as a familiar voice was suddenly heard from behind. He turned around slightly and found Naruto standing on the infirmary doorstep while cracking his knuckles and sent Sasuke a nasty glare.

Sasuke pulled his arm away from Tsunade before he stood from his seat and returned the challenge with a scrutinizing gaze. "So you're here to cry in pain after I beat the shit out of you, huh, total moron?" Sasuke taunted the blond, sneering.

"Asshole!" Naruto almost threw a punch at Sasuke again when suddenly Tsunade, with her monstrous power, pulled him and Sasuke at the same time knocking their foreheads against each other… hard, producing a loud satisfying thumping sound.

"AAARGH!" Sasuke and Naruto cried painfully in unison as they felt the stars suddenly spun around their head at the impact of the blow.

"Wha—what the hell are you doing, old hag!?" Naruto yelled at her while covering his abused forehead, trying to nurse the bump, looking pained and annoyed at the same time. He seemed to be dizzy after the sudden crash with Sasuke's head.

"Instead of bickering all the times, why don't you just kiss each other and go on date or something? Your loud yapping voices are grating on my nerves!" Tsunade shouted at them back as fiercely, eyebrows twitching dangerously. She really didn't like the after-event-mess the boys usually created after their stupid fights.

Naruto and Sasuke's face paled slightly at the telltale sign of violence she promised them before they seemed to register her words and blew up crimson like a ripe tomato, apparently having a decency to feel embarrassed at Tsunade's choice of –kiss each other-and –go on date- phrases.

"Why the hell must I kiss him and go on a date with him!?" Naruto looked officially horrified, pointing at Sasuke disgustedly.

"Instead of dating him, I prefer dating my dog," Sasuke scoffed, making a sick expression after hearing such mortifying suggestion.

"Then, stop bickering and make up! And let me treat your wounds peacefully!" Tsunade shouted even louder, glaring murderously at the boys who seemed to feel intimidated at her aura.

Naruto and Sasuke glanced at each other warily before reluctantly agreeing to have a momentary truce and shutting their mouth, just because they didn't want to end up as fishcakes in Pacific Ocean for antagonizing Tsunade more than they already had. She almost lost the last string called patience in her mind, and she was positive that she would likely kill them instead of treating their wounds unless they cooperated with her.

"Yes Ma'am," Naruto and Sasuke begrudgingly responded to her order and Tsunade huffed out a satisfied sigh as she finally could work peacefully.

The boys sat quietly in front of Tsunade, scowls still adorning their faces while Tsunade was treating their wounds. Ten minutes later, the procedure was done, and they were about to come back to their own classrooms when suddenly Naruto's father, Uzumaki Arashi (2) entered the infirmary.

"Huh, Dad? What are you doing here?" Naruto widened his eyes in surprise to see the older blond man who looked just like Naruto, only more mature.

"I knew you'd be here," Arashi said with a small smile, shaking his head in defeat after seeing the bruises and bandages on Naruto's body.

"What is it? If it's about these bruises, I let you know that I fought to protect my dignity," Naruto said, putting cutely.

"Dignity over a piece of pasta bread," Sasuke snorted, smirking while looking at the other way.

"Shut up, Sasuke! I heard you, asshole!" Naruto yapped and glared daggers at Sasuke again, face suspiciously turning a bit pink either in anger or in embarrassment.

"Sasuke?" Arashi blinked, raising his eyebrow slightly upon hearing Sasuke's name. "Ah, are you Uchiha Sasuke?" he asked as he noticed Sasuke's presence there.

"Err, yeah," Sasuke answered slowly, nodding slightly.

"So, you are the Sasuke-kun. I heard about you a lot from Naruto," Arashi chuckled slightly with a friendly look as he eyed the raven haired boy up and down, looking amused and interested.

"Eh?" Sasuke raised his eyebrow back, looking slightly dumbfounded.

Naruto snapped when his father suddenly mentioned his name. "Wait a sec,Dad!?" the younger blonde seemed to panic for some reasons, seeming to try to stop his father embarrassing him farther in front of Sasuke, but failed miserably because Arashi was taller and stronger than him to keep him away from their conversation.

"He always talked about you when we had dinner together. He said you were the only person who could work him up in school," Arashi grinned as he saw his son's mortified slowly reddening face.

"Dad!" Naruto yelled at him childishly, face completely red now, that somehow made Sasuke stare at him, seeming to be astonished and probably thinking that Naruto looked extremely adorable right then.

Sasuke gasped and kicked his head mentally when he seemed to realize about what he was thinking just now.

The raven coughed slightly. "So…, you actually admire me, eh… Naruto?" Sasuke asked then, looking completely arrogant and was that a teasing smirk on his face?

"Who the hell admires you, bastard?!" Naruto retaliated, looking totally embarrassed and angry at the same time. He seemed very keen to hit Sasuke again at this point, but since his father was there with a vice-like grip on his shoulder, Naruto could only clench and un-clench his fist.

"Arashi, you really like teasing your own son," Tsunade chuckled seeing the soap opera before her eyes.

"Aah, Tsunade-hime, I'm sorry for my rudeness. Should have greeted you first," Arashi then turned to face her, smiling his 'marketing smile' while keeping his left grip secure on Naruto's shoulder. Then he took Tsunade's hand with his right hand and kissed the back of her palm while closing his eyes gently.

Sasuke and Naruto were floored at the sight before them. Even Naruto seemed to forget his anger towards Sasuke and hugged Sasuke in reaction of his shock. Sasuke did the same when he seemed to be flabbergasted as well by it.

Well, addressing Tsunade who was very famous with her monstrous power as 'hime' would freak people out. Only Arashi would do something like that despite knowing her very well. Tsunade shook her head at his antic.

Sasuke and Naruto were sweating bullets as Tsunade and Arashi chatted like old friends.

"Is your father a host or something?" Sasuke's disbelieving voice was heard, whispering tentatively.

"Hell if I know," Naruto's hushed answer was pretty much showing his discomfort as well.

They didn't seem to realize that were still hugging each other's bodies until Arashi once again turned to face his son and his friend, raising his eyebrows while smiling in amusement. Tsunade chuckled as well at seeing the two boy's very close distance.

"Hmm…. The two of you are pretty close, aren't you? You get along so well," Arashi commented, setting a cheery face, sounding very pleased.

"Huh?" Naruto and Sasuke looked upward at the older blond weirdly before they turned their gaze at each other and upon realizing their position; they shrieked and scrambled away from each other as if the others' body was on fire.

"Why the hell did you hug me, you pervert?!" Naruto shouted at Sasuke while blushing furiously.

"That's my line, you asshole!" Sasuke yelled back, looking scandalized as well.

"What did you say!?"

"What!?"

"Ok, boys, stop the love quarrel now and follow me please," Arashi said, laughing amusedly while tugging Naruto's back collar to move.

Sasuke and Naruto's face flushed even harder at that and they shouted in unison to deny that. "We are NOT!"

"Yes, yes, ah, Sasuke-kun too, your mother is waiting for you in teachers' office," Arashi added in dismissing manner, still with his amused smile, totally ignoring their protest.

"Huh? Mother is here?" Sasuke looked very surprised at that news.

"Yup, there's something we'd like to discuss with you guys," Arashi said rather mysteriously. "Come on. See you later, Tsunde-hime!" he then pulled Naruto and Sasuke out of the infirmary while waving at Tsunade.

Tsunade of course saw the way Sasuke and Naruto glance at each other, raising their eyebrows oddly and wonderingly.

~Sasuke x Naruto~

Arashi, Naruto and Sasuke walked on the hallway from the infirmary in Center Building to the teachers' office. In front of the office was a beautiful woman with pale fair skin and smooth long black hair, standing quietly in a calm, elegant feature.

Naruto dropped his jaw in a shock when Sasuke ran to her and called her, "Mother!"

The woman, Uchiha Mikoto, turned her face and smiled gently at her son. "Sasuke, dear, I've been waiting for you," she said with her motherly soft voice.

Impossible! She's his mom!?—Naruto thought in utter disbelief.

Arashi looked at his son in feeble smile before he greeted Mikoto too. "Hello, Mikoto-san," Arashi waved his hand at Mikoto and she immediately noticed him.

"Arashi-san!" Mikoto's expression lit up like a Christmas tree, looking very happy and sparkling as she saw the handsome blond man who smiled very charmingly at her.

"Your mother and my father knew each other?" Naruto whispered at Sasuke, totally dumbfounded, while staring at the view in total disbelief.

"Don't ask me. It's the first time I've seen her like that!" Sasuke replied in the same undertone, seeming completely thunderstruck as well.

Mikoto and Arashi talked for awhile in a very nice, warm atmosphere around them that Naruto (and maybe Sasuke as well) grew rather uncomfortable seeing it. They smiled at each other tenderly as well before they nodded and then turned to face Sasuke and Naruto.

"We should let them know now, as the day is coming closer," Mikoto suddenly suggested.

"You're right. Should we ask them out to get lunch together?" Arashi offered.

"Good idea, Arashi-san," Mikoto said nodding softly.

Then Arashi walked to the teachers' office to ask for permission to take Sasuke and Naruto home early. Naruto and Sasuke couldn't help looking at each other again, increasingly getting anxious of what was happening.

~Sasuke x Naruto~

A short time later, Arashi, Mikoto, Sasuke and Naruto were already seated at a round table of a certain family restaurant in Konoha City together. Naruto and Sasuke fidgeted uncomfortably on their seats as Arashi and Mikoto preferred to order their foods and drinks first before starting the conversation of why they were there.

"Actually…, what are we doing here?" Sasuke, feeling he couldn't ask his mother, directed the question to Naruto, a bead of sweat prickling out his face.

"If you ask me then… to whom should I ask?" Naruto asked back.

"Useless moron," Sasuke grunted while sighing in defeat.

"Arrogant bastard," Naruto retaliated slowly, insulting him back.

Then they glared at each other again.

"Alright, let's do this," Arashi began. Sasuke and Naruto snapped out of their silent bickering and gave their attention fully to their parents.

"Well, actually… we have been seeing each other for a long time now, right?" Mikoto informed the children, and then smiled at Arashi.

"Yep, we even have talked about ourselves to each other and realized that we actually have many things in common. We also realized that we need the same thing too, the companion of each other," Arashi said, supporting Mikoto's words with a light chuckle.

"What do you mean by that?" Sasuke asked further. He didn't know why, but somehow… he had a bad feeling about this, while Naruto was just staring at them, seeming to have no clue at all about what they were talking about.

"Hmm…, how about we shorten everything more clearly?" Arashi glanced at Mikoto. She nodded in 'it can't be helped' kind of look. "Ok, listen carefully, you two," he began again, "The two of us… have decided to get married," he continued.

There was a long, thick, pregnant silence as Sasuke and Naruto tried to register the word the two of them had decided to get married...

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! #$%^&*ASDFGHJKL MARRIED!?

"EEEEEEEEEH!?"

Then the united very loud screech of the two shocked senior high school boys echoed throughout the all the rooms of the shaking restaurant, creating a small scale local earthquake in Konoha City.

End of Prologue

Tbc…

Side Notes:

(1)Gakuran: kind of uniform, usually at a private high school in Japan

(2)Uzumaki Arashi: I'm completely aware that Namikaze Minato is Naruto's father's name, but for the sake of the plot, he will be using this name before Namikaze Minato's name will be revealed in much-much later chapters (there will be suspense here too, dear readers!)

A/N: Right, since many people nag me to repost this story (which I wonder why, by the way. It was completely hideous when I reread it), I decided to post it again. Yes, I rewrote it because the previous wordings were very bad. I hope I made it better this time.

Well, I need feedback from you, readers, again. Don't hesitate to point my errors since I want to make this as improved and best as possible so you won't get bored rereading this story, okay?