Alright, here's the newly reworked prologue!

Disclaimer: I do not own Percy Jackson and The Olympians. I do, however own anything you don't recognize.

The door to Cabin 3 flew open. "Percy! Percy? Where are you?" A muffled groan arose from the bed.

"A-a-Annabeth?..."

"Percy, come on, Chiron needs you at the Big House!" Annabeth crossed over to the bunk beds and yanked on the blankets until they flew off, and then ran off. I sat up just in time to see her blonde curls flying up the hill towards the Big House. I groaned to myself. Annabeth and I had been dating for a few weeks now, and apparently that gave her permission to wake me up in the most annoying way possible-pulling off my blankets.

I pulled myself up out of bed, and pulled on jeans and my orange Camp Half-Blood tee-shirt, before I followed Annabeth up the hill. When I arrived, Chiron, Annabeth, and Mr. D were sitting at the card table always present on the porch, but the cards were surprisingly absent.

"Ah, Peter Johnson," said Mr. D. "Good morning, the sun is shining, blah, blah, blah." Chiron shot him a disapproving look. "Oh, alright, alright. Peter Johnson,"

"-Percy Jackson." I cut in.

"Yes, yes, whatever." Mr. D. replied. "Anyway, you two have been summoned to Olympus. Argus will take you to the Empire State Building, don't get yourselves killed...although that would be nice...and stay out of trouble for once. That's it. Goodbye. You have five minutes before Argus leaves." He conjured a Diet Coke, and gave us a look that clearly said-this conversation is over. Annabeth and I walked off the porch and leaned against the railing.

"So, do you have any idea why we are being summoned?" I asked. Annabeth shook her head, her curls bouncing.

"Nope," she said "No idea."

We walked down to where Argus was waiting, and got in the car. We sat in silence as the car rolled through the countryside and into the city.

At the Empire State Building, well, that's when things started to get a little weird. Argus had dropped us off, and we went inside, prepared to beg, plead, and bribe the man at the desk. But when he saw us he jumped up, ran over to us, and handed Annabeth a little scroll. "A message from the gods." He said. "Don't read it until you're in the elevator."

Well, we thought that was strange, since, after all, we'd be with the gods in less than five minutes. We piled into the elevator, slid the card into the slot, but the button for the 600th floor didn't appear. We were about to climb back out and tell the guy at the desk, when a blue vortex came swirling out of nowhere. It surrounded Annabeth, and I and I got a weird feeling. You know, like when you stick your head out the car window on the freeway, and then you can't breathe? It was like that. When the wind stopped, we were still in the elevator, but the button for the 600th floor had finally appeared. As we climbed farther and farther up, I told Annabeth, "We should read that note. Maybe it'll explain the wind."

Annabeth unfurled the scroll and read.


Perseus and Annabeth,

There is another prophecy that states:

Two warriors, both leaders, shall go back to the past

Wisdom and Power shall be united

Together, they can do what neither could do alone

Their love shall change the past, present, and future

This prophecy pertains to you. We have sent you back. We need you to help us fix our mistakes, before it's too late.

~The Gods


Annabeth and I just stared at each other. We were in the past, and I had no clue how far back. Just then, the elevator dinged, and announced they had arrived at Olympus. We took deep breaths, and stepped out into a new world-together.

So, tell me what you think so far. Please PM me with any and all critiques.

~MusicIsHarmony