This is my first fanfic so please be gentle and also review so I can improve as a writer. Enjoy
Alex: bold letters
Naruto: Cursive letter
Naruto meets Alex Mercer: The start of a new life
My name is Naruto Mercer formerly known as Uzumaki that changed the night I left. It all started the day that I and my sister Naruko were born, that day the Kyubi No Kitsune attacked the village of Konoha. Our father the Yondaime Hokage in order to bring peace to the village decided to seal the Kyubi in my sister and me. She got the chakra while I got the soul, from that day on my life changed, she was praised while was left in the shadows. But that changed the day I met my new brother.
I was running as fast as my legs could I could tell I was getting tired but that damn mob just won´t give up not until they killed the "demon brat" as they come to call me. It all ended for me when I got in a dead end.
At the other side of the village
Ok I managed to get past the veil, now what. He started sprinting to the nearest wall until he hit that familiar 90 degree angle. He started sweeping the area until he found something that made him sick. It was a slightly big crowd but what shocked him the most was the 5 year old boy right in the middle. Stabbed, burnt that were something's that made him mad so he decided to step up.
Shinobi: well look at that we´ve got a stranger with us
Alex: leave the kid alone you fucker
Shinobi: I don´t think so you see that isn´t a kid *Alex raised a brow to that* he is a demon, he killed my wife
Alex was mad beyond compare he shifted his biomass into a blade and attacked the ninjas. He then turned to the boy
Alex: are you alright kid?
Naruto: I…I think so. *he eyed Alex uncomfortably looking at his odd clothes, he was wearing a black leather jacket with a weird red symbol on the back he was wearing a grey hoodie and a white shirt underneath, on the lower part he was wearing some strange pants he´d never seen before and black shoes*who are you?
Alex chuckled slightly: sorry the name´s Alex and you are?
Naruto answered him like nothing happened
So kid why are you outside I mean your parents must be worried
Naruto looked sad: they hate me, I'm just the other one they favor my sister over me
Alex looked amused: kid you have been through a lot and it seems like your organs are damaged. I offer you a deal, something that can save your life
Naruto was surprised: why would you help me?
Because you remind me of myself, here´s the deal I save your ass and in return you come with me while I train you on how to use your abilities. ¿Do we have a Deal?
Naruto just nodded Alex smirked under his hood. Then brace yourself this is going to hurt. He buried his hand in naruto´s chest while black and red tendrils shoot from his arm. Then Naruto blacked out.
This is just the beginning of his new life
So how did I do? Please read and review so I can make another chapter. Naruto's interactions with his family will be in next chapter, that is if you like it or not. Anyway bye