I've got three fresh ideas for a story in my head. This is probably my
favorite. Great Expectations.^_^
Frankly my fellow writers, I don't own Inu Yasha and co.
Chapter 1:Turning heads
"Are you ready to go YET?" Inu Yasha asked in his bored tone. He laid stretched out on Kagome's bed as she stuff things into her backpack.
"You can't blame me for being a women Inu Yasha, I never pack lightly." Kagome put her mathbook in and was ready to go.
"About time." He huffed and jumped off of her bed. And they walked downstairs. "You didn't have to come here to get me." Kagome said.
Inu Yasha huffed again and said, "Feh! If I didn't you probably would've taken another day in your time just to spite me."
They walked out the door. Kagome's family waved her off. "Goodbye Kagome!" Her mom said. "Have fun in the feudal era!"
"Bye everyone!" Kagome waved behind her.
"Hurry up." Inu Yasha said in his annoyed tone.
"Oh, yeah." Kagome said sarcastically, "If we don't get there in the next ten seconds, Naraku might conquer the Earth!"
"That's right!" Inu Yasha said, "We gotta move!"
Suddenly they past a couple of tall boys from Kagome's school. One of them turn and whistled, "Hey Baby!"
Kagome looked at them and blushed.
"WHAT?!?" Inu Yasha glared at them. He started to stomp toward them.
"Sit." Kagome said.
WHAM!
Kagome walked over to him and said, "Just ignore those jerks!"
He pulled his face out of the ground and shouted, "What are you up to here when I'm gone??"
"Get a clue!" she snapped at him and left him swearing in the dirt.
They jumped out of the well and passed a field of wildflowers. Kagome lingered on their beauty, and took in their fresh scent. "Aren't they pretty, Inu Yasha?" she said.
"Whatever." He said. Not bothering to look.
They walked into the village and passed two village teenagers. One of them whistled at her and said, "Hey Baby! What's your sign?"
Inu Yasha growled angrily at him and the two guys ran off in a panic. Kagome kept telling him over and over again to forget about it, then she made the mistake of saying, "I won't worry about something as small as that. I've gotten others that were ten times as corny."
"YOU'VE GOTTEN OTHER COMMENTS!!!" he looked at her.
"Okay, stop yelling." She held her hands up.
"I'M NOT YELLING!" he shouted.
"What's all of the noise about?" Sango and Miroku came around the corner with Kirara and Shippou.
"Kagome!" Shippou shouted. He ran up to Kagome and jumped into her arms.
"Hello Shippou-chan!" Kagome smiled at his kitsune kuteness. She kissed him on each cheek. He kissed her on each cheek.
'She gives him WAY too much attention.' Inu Yasha thought with a twinge of jealousy.
"Greeting Lady Kagome." Miroku said. Inu Yasha saw him reach behind her and Kagome flinched violently. Sango saw it too.
"PERVERT!" They both shrieked and attacked the priest.
Later that night, Shippou had counted ten pickup lines, two gropes, six whistles for Kagome, and thirteen sits for Inu Yasha. They made camp. Inu Yasha sat far away from the fire, but could still feel its heat. He sat sulking with his back to everyone, thought it hurt like hell.
Everyone looked over at him in silence. Finally Shippou looked up at Kagome and asked, "What did you do to him?"
"Me!" Kagome shouted. "He's the one being super possessive every time a guy says one word to me!"
"Well you have been getting a lot of attention lately." Sango said, with a slight tinge of jealousy. "Maybe you'd better talk to him."
Kagome sighed and walked over to him. As she approached he gave a warning growl. "Come on Inu Yasha." She said. She reached out to touch him and he moved away from her hand. "Look, I'm sorry if what they said bothered you, but I- "
"Who said it bothered me?" he said. Then he crawled up into a tree and got ready for sleep.
The next morning, Kagome was the first to wake up. Shippou woke up right after she did, because he was sleeping on top of her blanket. She looked up at Inu Yasha who had changed positions in his sleep. "Kagome!" Shippou shouted. "Kagome look!" she turned her head to see a scroll sticking out of her pillow. Kagome looked at the scroll and realized it was tied to a bouquet of wild flowers. She sniffed the bouquet then untied the scroll. Her name was written in calligraphy on it. Shippou took some of the flowers and started to gnaw on them. Kagome opened the scroll and she read:
Sweet Kagome, I love you, and your sweet kindness but I am too shy to tell you myself. I'm not a good poet either So instead I got you flowers that I think are as lovely as you. -Your secret Admirer
Kagome stared at the letter in awe. Shippou looked over her shoulder. "What's a secret admirer?" he asked.
"It's someone who admires you secretly!" Kagome said. She sniffed what was left of the flowers deeply. 'I wonder who it is?' she thought. She looked at the flowers and suddenly realized what a clue they were.
Inu Yasha yawned and jumped out of the tree, he cracked his knuckles and neck bones then started to walk toward the lake. Suddenly he heard something coming fast behind him.
GLOMP!
He was knocked to the ground harder then when Kagome sat him. "What the-?" he shouted and pulled himself up with Kagome's arms around him. He blushed when he realized it was her. "W-what do you want?" he asked.
She let go and he got up to dust himself off. She stared up at him with large eyes filled with admiration. Inu Yasha sweatdropped. Then Kagome said, "Thank you, Inu Yasha! You're so sweet!" she hugged him again.
He made a confused look. Even though he loved her scent, and how strong it got when she was that close to him, something strange was going on. "May I ask what in the seven hells you're talking about?" he asked.
Kagome showed him the flowers and read the letter aloud. Inu Yasha raised an eyebrow at her, "Who wrote that crap?"
She stared at him in surprise. "You mean it wasn't you?"
Suddenly it hit him, "WAIT A MINUTE!! Did a boy send you that?!?!?"
"I hope it was a boy." She said. Big mistake.
Inu Yasha made a face like she had just said, "I love Kouga."
She looked at him nervously.
Then he bounded off into the trees. 'I'll hunt him down!' he thought. 'I'll rip out his eyes and use them as golf balls.'
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What do you think? Any guesses on who the secret admirer is?
Frankly my fellow writers, I don't own Inu Yasha and co.
Chapter 1:Turning heads
"Are you ready to go YET?" Inu Yasha asked in his bored tone. He laid stretched out on Kagome's bed as she stuff things into her backpack.
"You can't blame me for being a women Inu Yasha, I never pack lightly." Kagome put her mathbook in and was ready to go.
"About time." He huffed and jumped off of her bed. And they walked downstairs. "You didn't have to come here to get me." Kagome said.
Inu Yasha huffed again and said, "Feh! If I didn't you probably would've taken another day in your time just to spite me."
They walked out the door. Kagome's family waved her off. "Goodbye Kagome!" Her mom said. "Have fun in the feudal era!"
"Bye everyone!" Kagome waved behind her.
"Hurry up." Inu Yasha said in his annoyed tone.
"Oh, yeah." Kagome said sarcastically, "If we don't get there in the next ten seconds, Naraku might conquer the Earth!"
"That's right!" Inu Yasha said, "We gotta move!"
Suddenly they past a couple of tall boys from Kagome's school. One of them turn and whistled, "Hey Baby!"
Kagome looked at them and blushed.
"WHAT?!?" Inu Yasha glared at them. He started to stomp toward them.
"Sit." Kagome said.
WHAM!
Kagome walked over to him and said, "Just ignore those jerks!"
He pulled his face out of the ground and shouted, "What are you up to here when I'm gone??"
"Get a clue!" she snapped at him and left him swearing in the dirt.
They jumped out of the well and passed a field of wildflowers. Kagome lingered on their beauty, and took in their fresh scent. "Aren't they pretty, Inu Yasha?" she said.
"Whatever." He said. Not bothering to look.
They walked into the village and passed two village teenagers. One of them whistled at her and said, "Hey Baby! What's your sign?"
Inu Yasha growled angrily at him and the two guys ran off in a panic. Kagome kept telling him over and over again to forget about it, then she made the mistake of saying, "I won't worry about something as small as that. I've gotten others that were ten times as corny."
"YOU'VE GOTTEN OTHER COMMENTS!!!" he looked at her.
"Okay, stop yelling." She held her hands up.
"I'M NOT YELLING!" he shouted.
"What's all of the noise about?" Sango and Miroku came around the corner with Kirara and Shippou.
"Kagome!" Shippou shouted. He ran up to Kagome and jumped into her arms.
"Hello Shippou-chan!" Kagome smiled at his kitsune kuteness. She kissed him on each cheek. He kissed her on each cheek.
'She gives him WAY too much attention.' Inu Yasha thought with a twinge of jealousy.
"Greeting Lady Kagome." Miroku said. Inu Yasha saw him reach behind her and Kagome flinched violently. Sango saw it too.
"PERVERT!" They both shrieked and attacked the priest.
Later that night, Shippou had counted ten pickup lines, two gropes, six whistles for Kagome, and thirteen sits for Inu Yasha. They made camp. Inu Yasha sat far away from the fire, but could still feel its heat. He sat sulking with his back to everyone, thought it hurt like hell.
Everyone looked over at him in silence. Finally Shippou looked up at Kagome and asked, "What did you do to him?"
"Me!" Kagome shouted. "He's the one being super possessive every time a guy says one word to me!"
"Well you have been getting a lot of attention lately." Sango said, with a slight tinge of jealousy. "Maybe you'd better talk to him."
Kagome sighed and walked over to him. As she approached he gave a warning growl. "Come on Inu Yasha." She said. She reached out to touch him and he moved away from her hand. "Look, I'm sorry if what they said bothered you, but I- "
"Who said it bothered me?" he said. Then he crawled up into a tree and got ready for sleep.
The next morning, Kagome was the first to wake up. Shippou woke up right after she did, because he was sleeping on top of her blanket. She looked up at Inu Yasha who had changed positions in his sleep. "Kagome!" Shippou shouted. "Kagome look!" she turned her head to see a scroll sticking out of her pillow. Kagome looked at the scroll and realized it was tied to a bouquet of wild flowers. She sniffed the bouquet then untied the scroll. Her name was written in calligraphy on it. Shippou took some of the flowers and started to gnaw on them. Kagome opened the scroll and she read:
Sweet Kagome, I love you, and your sweet kindness but I am too shy to tell you myself. I'm not a good poet either So instead I got you flowers that I think are as lovely as you. -Your secret Admirer
Kagome stared at the letter in awe. Shippou looked over her shoulder. "What's a secret admirer?" he asked.
"It's someone who admires you secretly!" Kagome said. She sniffed what was left of the flowers deeply. 'I wonder who it is?' she thought. She looked at the flowers and suddenly realized what a clue they were.
Inu Yasha yawned and jumped out of the tree, he cracked his knuckles and neck bones then started to walk toward the lake. Suddenly he heard something coming fast behind him.
GLOMP!
He was knocked to the ground harder then when Kagome sat him. "What the-?" he shouted and pulled himself up with Kagome's arms around him. He blushed when he realized it was her. "W-what do you want?" he asked.
She let go and he got up to dust himself off. She stared up at him with large eyes filled with admiration. Inu Yasha sweatdropped. Then Kagome said, "Thank you, Inu Yasha! You're so sweet!" she hugged him again.
He made a confused look. Even though he loved her scent, and how strong it got when she was that close to him, something strange was going on. "May I ask what in the seven hells you're talking about?" he asked.
Kagome showed him the flowers and read the letter aloud. Inu Yasha raised an eyebrow at her, "Who wrote that crap?"
She stared at him in surprise. "You mean it wasn't you?"
Suddenly it hit him, "WAIT A MINUTE!! Did a boy send you that?!?!?"
"I hope it was a boy." She said. Big mistake.
Inu Yasha made a face like she had just said, "I love Kouga."
She looked at him nervously.
Then he bounded off into the trees. 'I'll hunt him down!' he thought. 'I'll rip out his eyes and use them as golf balls.'
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What do you think? Any guesses on who the secret admirer is?