OK, so I re-read this story and realized... truthfully, i think it sucked.
I mean, there was so much more I could do with it and I could be a better writer so I have decided to stop writing this story.
I mean, I can add quotes and sections from the actual book which I really want to do!
Instead, I will re-write it... Again!
But, I'm not going to fix these chapters, instead I am going to upload them to a different story so it wont be as confusing. (you know I'll uploud the new and improved chapters. [i confused myself])
Teh new story will be called, The Innocence of Magic and the first chapter + prologue(which is technically the first chapter so...) will be uploaded in the next couple of hours.
Again, thank you so much for the support and I hope you enjoy the rewrites along with my improved writing.