Small update.
A lot of people have been messaging me and leaving reviews complaining about the flow/confusing nature of this story. I hear you guys and I agree.
So, starting now I'm going to be doing a major edit of this story, starting with the first chapter and working up through my most recent before I add anything new.
Hopefully it will clear some things up and make it a tighter story.
I apologize for any confusion my writing has caused, don't give up on me yet.
Thanks,
Dog