ok got some some good advice to fix this so. Ok lets give this updated ch 1 another try thank you

I like scary

He sat there in his throne sounded by the darkness with his thoughts. Why did he have to be so alone? Why must he invisible ? After the fight with the guardians and being trapped back in his lair Pitch had so much time to think...to much time in his Oppian. He got up and walked over to a cracked mirror. As he stood there he took in all his features. His slick back black hair, his well chiseled face. Removing his robe he stared down his body. Muscular but not to much, well formed. His pale gray skin and bright glowing eyes. Yes he was what all night mares were made of. But still good looking. "And with my charming personality ..." He smiled at the thought. Yes Pitch was lonely and longed to be believed in. If only one person. Pulling his robe back on he left, perhaps some fresh air might help.
Pitch walk through a shadow and came out in Maple Shade N.J. the street lights flickered out as he walked by them . It was well into the night and everyone was in bed asleep. As he made his way past the darkened houses a faint scream from not too far away caught his attention. Pitch made his way to the last house on the street. A small house with a faint flickering light coming from the right top window. Pitch floated up and peered in. There he saw a girl clutching a pillow with wide eyes. He glanced over to where she was staring . A small smirk on his lips. ( So a scary movie , well now looks like i'll have some fun tonight.) He thought. Pitch sat and waited till the movie was finally over and she had went to bed. He slipped in her room and creeped over to her bed. As he looked down at her he took her in . She looked about late 20's early 30's with short curly black hair with a blue hue to it as the faint moonlight shone in through the window. He looked down her body( not bad) he thought. Pitch lean over and worked his dark magic. At first she wiggled and whimpered and a smile crossed the nightmare kings lips. He was so proud in his work. Then her whimper turned to a small squeak. Pitch looked back down at her and to his surprise and dismay she was smiling!... All that went through his mind was ( What the fuck?, Why the hell would someone be smiling in the middle of a nightmare?!) So he took a look into her dream. He was shocked! She had turned her nightmare into a horror survival dream and she liked it!. No one likes their nightmares. Pitch stayed there all night throwing every nightmare he could think of at her. But the result was all the same. As the sun rose Pitch just couldn't take his eyes off her. Until he couldn't stay there anymore.
He walked through a shadow and went back to his lair to wait out the day. So here he was waiting out the day. Until he went to visit that weird girl again. but this time something unsuspected happened. As he sat there on her windowsill watching the movie. She said a sarcastic comment about the character that was about to be killed and Pitch for the first time that night put in his two cents. Then it happened she turned toward the window. And she screamed throwing her pillow at the window! Shocked Pitch came fully in the room. She got up and raced to her phone to call 911 but Pitch gathered his wits and quickly stopped her. He pinned her against a wall with his hand over her mouth. She stared at him with fear in her wide eyes. Oh how he loved that look on her. Pitch wanted to droll out the moment but decided to ask. " Can you see me?"