"Father?" A boy with long spiky black hair asked

"Yes, Raditz" The adult answered

"Have you seen Kakarot, yet" Asked the newly named Raditz

"No, why?" The adult asked as he began putting on the top of his green and blue armor

"Just wondering. He looks just like you" Raditz said as he too donned the armor equipping a brown and black version

"Ok. Well I have an assignment to do, bye." The Saiyans says as he walks towards the door.

"As do I father" the boy said as he followed his father.

Walking out to their Saiyan pods the two get in to their respective pods before they are flown into the air.

"Fasha to Bardock" A video screen appeared in the adult Saiyans pod.

"Bardock here" Bardock replied

"Are you ready for the Planet Kanassa mission?"Fasha asked

"Yes" Bardock replies while putting his scouter on

"Alright then, Tora, Borgos, and Shugesh are already on their way, we are the last two still on Vegeta." Fasha reported

"Alright lets move out." Bardock says as he closes the screen and his pod launched itself into the outer atmosphere.

"Engaging Sleep mode" the sphere said as it began to put the warrior into sleep stasis


Some time later


"Sleep mode ended" The pod voice said

Steeping out of the pod he see his team already out of the their pods.

"Alright lets kill some people" Fasha said as she fired a blast into the city

"Gladly" Bardock says as he stretches his neck


Millions of dead aliens later


"So why does Frieza want this rock?" Tora asked crushing a piece of building in his hand

"There is a rumor/fact that this planet gives you some form of psychic ability" Fasha replied

"Wait does or doesn't it?" Shugesh asked

"We're not sure, the people who where interrogated where natives so, it may be a genetic thing instead of a habitual one." Bardock replies

"The powers are true" an unknown voice said as all the Saiyans turned around to see a surviving Kanassian.

The Kanassian rushes toward Bardock hitting him with a high power ki wave blast. The blast flings the Saiyan back into a nearby building. Fasha hit the being with a ki blast followed by Shugesh kneeing him into the air.

"Fuck you! FINAL SPIRIT CANNON" Bardock shouts as he fires a sphere of ki at the Kassian obliterating him.

"Enjoy your curse Saiyan" The Kassians voice could clearly be heard even though he was vaporized.

"What was he talking about?" Bardock asked stepping out of the destroyed building

Bardock sudden falls forward.

"BARDOCK!" Fasha yelled as she rushed to her leader.


'Your curse is you get to see the future' an eerie voice says

In the darkness that was his mind Bardock could see a mini version of himself on another planet

'My son' Bardock deduced

He sees Kakarot being tutored by an old man and befriending a girl. Then he sees his team dead.


Bardock suddenly jolted awake

"Bardock are you ok?" a voice asked

"Ymehs Imhm fmihne" Bardock said as he realized he was in a healing tank.

"Sorry about that." the voice said as it released the Saiyan from the healing chamber.

"Where am I?" Bardock asked as he was now free from breathing apparatus of the machine

"Planet Vegeta. Your team brought you here after you were attacked on Kanassa." the doctor explained

"How bad was i hurt?" Bardock asked

"From what we could diagnose you just had some scratches but we still could not get you to wake up." the doctor said as he looked over the Saiyan's chart.

"Damn I must be getting weak in my old age." Bardock replied

"Would you like to see your son he is almost set to leave?" The doctor asked Bardock

"Sure, where is he?" Bardock asked, putting on his clothes

"Down the hall in the newborn section" The doctor points.

Following the doctor's directions Bardock find the area and sees that there are only two babies in there: Broly and Kakarot. Turning on the scouter he is surprised.

'The fuck this baby, Broly's, power level is 10,000. Mine is only 9,500' Bardock notes before looking at Kakarot. '10 not bad considering he is only two days old.'

"Hey doc where is my team" Bardock asked the doctor

"They had an assignment on Planet Meat." The doctor says reading some charts.

"Thanks" Bardock says as he walks towards the exit


Walking to the pod area Bardock boards his pod with coordinates for Planet Meat.


Stepping out of the pod Bardock can't believe his eyes. Not only where the inhabitants of Meat dead but also his team.

"Bar...dock" A weak voice calls

Going over to the voice Bardock finds a dying Tora.

"What happened?" Bardock asked as he picked his friend up.

"Frieza wants us destroyed" Tora struggles out

"Why this team?" Bardock asked

"Not just... us, all Saiyans" He stated, before all his life force left his body.

Setting his friend down Bardock returns to his pod focused or preserving his race.

"Set coordinates to Planet Vegeta" Bardock said as he climbed into the pod

"Coordinates set" the computer said. With that the pod flew into the direction of Planet Vegeta.


Looking out the window of the pod Bardock see planet Vegeta and Frieza's ship sitting in space.

Kicking the door of the pod Bardock flies thru Space in front of the ship

"FREIZA" Bardock shouts


"What's that out there?" The purple manwoman asked, looking a a blip on the radar

"It appears to be Bardock, a Saiyan from the group that conquered Kassana." Zarbon reported

"I thought you killed all of those monkeys, Dodoria?" Frieza asked his fat henchmen

"I did Lord Frieza, he wasn't there when I destroyed his team" Dodoria reported

"Oh well send my soldiers out there" Frieza ordered

"Yes sir" Zarbon complied

Out of Frieza ships came hundreds of soldiers.

"You'll need to try harder then that, Full Power Energy Wave" Bardock fired the beam destroying a couple of hundreds of troops.

"Very nice" Frieza, now outside of his ship in his egg pod said "Too bad you must die. SUPER NOVA!" The tyrant shouted as he launched a spark of ki that grew to the size of the moon orbiting Vegeta.

"FINAL SPIRIT CANNON" Bardock fired at the center of the mass of the blast had no effect as the beam kept getting closer and closer before Bardock knew he lost. Out the corner of his eye, he saw one Saiyan pod escape the certain doom of the planet.

'Kakarot' Was his final thought as the ball engulfed him Frieza's soldiers and before causing Vegeta to explode.


So ppl please rate and review this is me re beginning my rewrite ive had to do it once because ff deleted my story and another time because super fleshed some things out.