So I genuinely don't know what to say next. If you want the story to continue submit your entry as a review. Not just ideas, I have plenty of those, but word for word what you think should come next.

I tried this with an original about some captive pleading for his life and my sister came up with: He smiled a little half smile, "You love me too much. You wouldn't do this to your own son."and it was far too perfect to pass up. So please help. I will credit the winner, and I look forward to seeing what you guys come up with.