I am so sorry to do this, since a lot of people are, but I have been looking over this story, and I have come to an important conclusion…

The whole damn thing is crap. The writing is so terrible it made me embarrassed. There are loose ends, dead ends, useless info, poor writing, grammar mistakes, corny sap, and just a ton of overall shit.

So I am taking it off and re-writing is. I hope no one it too upset. I don't know why you would be since the story is terrible anyway.

But again, sorry. It is just something I need to do.