Overhauling

Alright, so here we are at chapter 10 and I'm rereading my own items here and I believe that what I set up started well because I had a coherent idea of what I wanted. I started just putting down whatever the hell I wanted as I went on so, I'm going to be editing this piece quiet a bit. As for how long it takes... Ya, won't waste time or expectations. When this is down, and -EDITING- is out from the description then it'll be done. Rereading my own work showcases several things I need to change.

1) The ages. I'm trying to write a badass unstoppable... 12 year old. I'm writing him with the attitude problem of an 18 year old and the situations of a 21+. So that's only one of the small things I need to change. In accordance with that I'll need to rewrite the intro and a little more in order to explain the shinobi world. Having twelve year old kids running around as cold blooded killers really isn't something that makes a lot of sense with what I'm attempting to accomplish. So I'll be upping all the kids to the age of 17-18 range. Old enough to already be at least partially viewed under the law as adults. Big difference in a headband allowing some 18 year olds into the odd 21+ items.

2) The characters. The way I wrote some of the characters, they wouldn't react the way I'm portraying and regardless of the fact I'm the writer, it's lazy to just have the characters act as puppets on a string because I was too lazy to keep the characters attitude constant. Also along with regards to characters, I need to actually introduce them, personality and all versus just expecting people to automatically know characters and associate them with the name. This is fanfiction, changing and fluctuating characters are a given. Just because he's got the same name doesn't mean it's the same character from the show so I need to expand on that.

3) Plot. Need to set one. At first I actually took the time to detail what should and what I would like to happen but with all later chapters I got lazy and was more interested in just getting them out than actually being satisfied with them. As a result I started just writing whatever I felt like to progress the story and was actually planning another power boost to just make fight scenes a breeze through so I could cop-out of writing them.

The rest of the reasons don't really need to be made or pointed out, just thought those looking forward to an update and getting this deserve a little explanation. So I'm going back over to repair what I made before I set it in stone by going too far.

Sorry to all of you that enjoyed what's going on so far. There are plenty of better stories out there and I hope you find them quickly.

-Peace for now.