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Joined 11-14-18, id: 11436765, Profile Updated: 01-14-19
Author has written 10 stories for Avatar: Last Airbender, and Naruto.

Hi everyone,

I created this account to write stories that people enjoy reading. I'm not looking to write some deep character examination, or anything like that, I want to write some dumb fun. That's my main goal. If you've got any suggestions, please let me know.

The stories I'm working on:

The First Firebender: I'll try to update this story at least once a month. I've looked online, and apparently it's better to upload with larger chapters even if less frequently. It's probably between 30-40% completed, the outline is almost done, and all the major plot points have been completed. I didn't really think I'd enjoy writing it much, so I didn't bother to make the story follow a five act structure. Stuff will happen, there will be a climatic battle, and then it'll be over. It will all go together though, so uh, there's that I guess? Hopefully, I'll have the wherewithal to complete the two sequels I have planned: The False Prophet, and The Last Waterbender, but no promises. If I do though, I'll try and make the plot more formulaic to give it that epic feel.

Question to anybody actually reading this fic: I rewrote the first chapter so it followed Ozai. Naturally I made him act like a dick. Is it a bad idea to start a story win an unsympathetic POV? I'm noticing a big drop in views after the first chapter that wasn't there before. Should I give the prologue the ole' axe?

The Cardiac Kid: Yeah, I'll admit it, this one is named after a famous Cleveland Browns team that went like 10-6 or something and lost in the divisional round. It'll be updated sporadically, and is a prequel to the First Firebender. There won't be any narrative structure to this story, it'll just be a bunch of self contained chapters.

Under The Ice - Finally, a title that doesn't start with the. A The Good Place fanfic. It'll be about a group of scientists going to Antarctica to study an emperor penguin that lives forever. I'll for sure write this someday. Maybe. Eh, when the Jaguars win the superbowl.

I'm looking for a beta reader. If you're also an author looking for a beta reader, especially one writing an Avatar story PM me and hopefully we can figure something out.

In closing: Go Hawks! Go M's! Go Dawgs!

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Misplaced Glory reviews
With her unheard of chakra reserves, relentless fighting style, and knack for inventing jutsu, Naruko Uzumaki is the type of genius that comes around once every hundred years. But there's one problem: she's a kunoichi. And with poor chakra control, no booksmarts, and more interest in Sasuke Uchiha than being a top shinobi she's seen as a dead last failure. SasuNaru
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 9 - Words: 40,051 - Reviews: 22 - Favs: 46 - Follows: 63 - Updated: 9/26 - Published: 7/14 - Sasuke U., Sakura H., Lee R., Naruko U.
Team Underdog reviews
Anko Mitarashi is sick of all of Konoha's elites. So she trains her team of rejects: Hinata Hyuga, the girl tossed aside by her clan; Sakura Haruno, the weak wallflower civilian girl; and uh… Naruko Namikaze, the healer who can't heal. And her little team of sh!tstains are gonna wipe the floor of all those snobby prodigies in the annual chunin exams. AU.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,070 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 24 - Follows: 34 - Published: 9/6 - Sakura H., Hinata H., Anko M., Naruko U.
Sasuke Uchiha and the Yellow Flasher reviews
On a patrol mission along the border between Fire and Lightning, Sasuke and Team Seven come across Konoha's most hated and feared enemy: The Yellow Flash. But the man was supposed to be dead, and he was supposed to be a man right? So why is this Yellow Flash a teenage girl, why won't she fight him, and what kind of stupid jutsu is that? Hiraishin! Naruko. SasuNaru. AU.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Humor/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 3 - Words: 6,930 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 34 - Follows: 40 - Updated: 9/3 - Published: 8/13 - Sasuke U., Naruko U.
Groundhog's Day Massacre reviews
Sasuke Uchiha relives the worst day of his life over and over again. But no matter what he does, he can't stop Itachi from killing his clan. But he doesn't mind too much, actually he finds it kind of funny, because he can always try again yesterday… But unknown to him there are two others in the loop with him, and without their help he will never escape it.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Angst/Friendship - Chapters: 2 - Words: 3,105 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 6 - Follows: 5 - Updated: 8/30 - Published: 8/23 - Naruto U., Sasuke U.
Azula's House of Cards reviews
Azula is not a prodigy. She's mischievous without the devious, she's a flashy firebender lacking substance, and she's a hard worker so long as she's in public. But she is a princess, and she somehow has her father's support. Can this no-talent, lazy good-for-nothing win the throne through smoke and mirrors? Maybe with a little help from her friends.
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: T - English - Humor/Drama - Chapters: 6 - Words: 17,498 - Reviews: 14 - Favs: 12 - Follows: 19 - Updated: 8/16 - Published: 7/14 - Mai, Ty Lee, Azula
Gundam Naruto reviews
Naruto, but with giant robots rather than ninjas. Naruto is a soldier, trained from birth, but he struggles to keep up with more naturally talented pilots like that bastard Sasuke. He wants to be the greatest pilot in the solar system, end the war, and make the old man happy. But when he gets a call from big brother Itachi, everything he thought he knew is thrown into question.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi/Fantasy - Chapters: 12 - Words: 40,643 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 11 - Follows: 12 - Updated: 8/6 - Published: 2/11/2019 - Naruto U., Sasuke U., Shikamaru N.
The First Firebender reviews
The chaos, misery, and destruction of the Hundred Year War has caused an ancient evil to awaken. The Avatar slept while the world faced this unprecedented threat, at least until Sokka woke him up. Now the two must find Sokka's missing sister, Katara, and together save the world. AU
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: T - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 22 - Words: 98,161 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 13 - Follows: 15 - Updated: 11/8/2019 - Published: 11/18/2018 - Aang, Sokka, Katara
The Chemist reviews
The Fire Nation was, without question, the most powerful country in the history of the world. The question is why. Not because of the power of the royal family, or its armies, but the mind of an unparalleled genius. Follow the story of The Mechanist, from his beginnings as a humble Air Nomad to his rise as an evil chemist whose inventions could destroy the world... Or save it. AU
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi/Tragedy - Chapters: 12 - Words: 12,517 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 4 - Follows: 8 - Updated: 7/5/2019 - Published: 4/19/2019 - Iroh, Mechanist
The Temple of Terror
The Gaang explore a haunted Temple. A monster sleeps in the dungeon. AU.
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: T - English - Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 12,273 - Follows: 1 - Published: 3/21/2019
The Cardiac Kid reviews
A Fire Nation prince is ashamed of who he is. Born with asthma, he is unable to generate the flames that the royal family are known for. The citizens mockingly call him the cardiac kid, and compare him negatively with his perfect older brother. Young Ozai burns for the chance to prove himself.
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: T - English - Drama/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,067 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 6 - Follows: 6 - Published: 12/27/2018 - Iroh, Ozai, Azulon - Complete