ImortalFalcon
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Joined 07-16-07, id: 1326842, Profile Updated: 12-23-10
Author has written 3 stories for Monster Hunter, Mass Effect, and Zombieland.

Sup, I am ImortalFalcon, a.k.a Jay.

I like Deadrising, Monster Hunter, Zelda, Mario, Star Wars, Warcraft, Tom Clancy stuff and any tactical warfare, fan of WWII things, humor, Halo, Gears Of War, Gears Of War 2, Overlord, anything Roman or of that era, Man Vs. Wild (go Bear Grylls!), Mike Rowe and Dirty Jobs, anything near the ocean, and so on.

Oh and favorite movie(s): Zombieland :D

hmm...I hate reading but love writing...well...if it's of my liking I'll read it.

Fan fic is my most loved writing form...I tried comics...I can't draw too well.

I stopped the monster hunter story for now...not much reads I guess, the not having a monster hunter category really slows down the consumer awareness. But I'm making a Mass Effect story, damn I love Mass Effect, kinda short though even with all the surveying and side missions, I hate thresher maws...they always dig right under me.

(Sorry for the lateness in chapter 5 of Forgotten Legacy. But it's finally up and 6 will be on its way.)

Chapter 6 is all done. It is now up and running.

Also:If I sent a message to anyone who is reading this right now, please tell me my message got to you. I've been having real huge problems regarding messages over the Internet.

Chapter 7 is near complete, a little more to go. I'm playing through the "Bring down the sky" expansion of Mass Effect. Further more I bought Super smash Brothers: Brawl so that's got me tied up as well. Any questions or suggestions (not that I'm running out of ideas) or if you just want me to get my act together and get my ass moving faster on the writing, please do so via message. I like messages, makes me happy to know I got at least a small fan base and/or person that wants to read my stories around. I'm also leaving past event typing up so I can bulk up my profile... I'm jealous of Cody MacArtthur Fett's profile. Also I'm rambling on to give my 'peeps' something to read while I'm "working" on my story.

Ok. I beat the "Bring down the sky" mission and I have to say it was pretty fun. It was cool seeing my version of Shepard back in action (apart from playing the whole game again). The Shepard that's featured in Forgotten Legacy that is. Those batarians are down right evil, which is a good thing seeing that I like down right evil enemies. Okie dokie back to my writing.

Warning: I just bought Rainbow Six Vegas 2 . Yup, another distraction. I'll try real hard to get some writing in between Terrorist hunts with my brother and the campaign... and team battles. It's not my fault that a few good games happened to come out over the course of a month.

April/8/08- Still working on Chapter 7, not that it's long or complex, just my life right now is busy. I promise it will be posted before the end of this month.

April/20/08- I'm almost done on chapter 7 just reviewing and editing, It would go alot faster if I didn't sleep every page or so, but that's how I think about what I wrote and change it. Quality is better than a fast to post chapter, so I've learned :P

Good news May/8/08- Chapter 7 is up, any special content and/or notes are inside. I will be planning on chapter 8 to be up alot faster than this one. Enjoy. Oh and like any late teenager I got GTA 4. Don't worry, I wont be playing it like mad, they took out planes and parachutes...

July/25/08- Chapter 8 is together and now installed. Been a busy summer with birthdays and events. Chapter 9 will be longer.

September/10/08- Thought I'd try and keep the trend going here on the "updates". Chapter 9 is on it's way, and it is a good one maybe even the best chapter yet! :D Chapter 9 is longer and almost done, provided hurricane Ike doesn't knock our power out...

September/11/08- I randomly wrote a poem today. Something inspired me to do it. here is the link if you want to read it. If you did tell me what you think, leave a comment there or email me :P

September/15/08- Chapter 9 up! Hope yall enjoy. Would have posted it sooner but the hurricane Ike thing and all that mucked my weekend of writing up. It's getting cooler outside already and that means one thing. My writing season! :P

December/28/08- Almost done with chapter 10. A few more words to go and then revision and we are A-OK. Also, as a side note my brother got a Wacom tablet for Christmas so I'll ask him to draw a few pictures of some of the main characters in Forgotten Legacy and maybe illustrations of some parts as well. Right now he's doing Gears of War 2 stuff (god I love that game!) and he might make a profile of his work on deviantart or something, I'll have links.

December/30/08- Chapter 10 is in the books and good to go. My brother's working on the character illustrations as I type this! I'm pretty excited about it. Chapter 11 is going to begin shortly. . . after I get some sleep perhaps. Hard to believe my fan-fic is nearly a year old, time flies.

February/20/09- Done with chapter 11. It's been a little over a year since I started writing Forgotten Legacy. I'm pleased with where it is going. I'm out of high-school now and going into the college zone, hopefully it won't effect my progress too much. It is, however, rather discouraging to not have any reviews my past two chapters. And not even making it out of the double didgets in hits on my last one. Suppose that's what I get for keeping you waiting. As for the character illustrations I was mentioning in my last post, hate to say it but, I don't think they're going to happen. Nevertheless I'll continue writing.

March/14/09- Chapter 12 should, by all means, be up by now. Oddly enough I can't get the document uploader to work correctly and am forced to post chapter 12 at a later date. Anyone else seem to have a lot of trouble with fanfiction lately?

March/15/09- Chapter 12 is up now, the complications were fixed. Hopefully you guys will enjoy the read. Chapter 13 will commence momentarily.

March/25/09- Chapter 13 is ready for reading. Notes/goodies and such are inside. According to the weather a massive thunderstorm is going to besiege my settlement . . . again. Chapter 14 is on it's way, hopefully without any wind, rain, and/or clouds of death.

March/26/09- I'm currently working on a massive overhaul on my chapters in FL. So if you have read up to the current chapter I recommend you to re-read or at least spot out the changes after my next update following this one. I'm going to be bolstering a few chapters, editing, clipping out some un-needed stuff where I see fit, separating the paragraphs with the line ("--") method, etc. I learned the line stuff from R-I-C-A-R-D, so thanks again for the idea on that man.

April/21/09- Chapter 14, finished. Read and review it when you can. I haven't found the documents of my previous chapters yet gasp. Which means I can't commence my chapter over-haul yet. "Re-read or at least spot out the changes after my next update following this one" still stands.

April/23/09- Story Updated: Chapter 1 of Forgotten Legacy has be re-worked and re-posted. More content, description, conversations, fixes, etc.

May/1/09- Story Updated: Chapter 2 of FL has now been re-done as well. More content and fixes.

May/21/09- Oh man. . . what a horrible week. . . My computer (yes the one I type on) is dead. Mother board has been aced. It's horrible cause I have 98 percent of chapter 15 done on there!! And I honestly don't know how to get it off. I'll have to swap the hard drive to either this computer (my brother's) or the new one that is hopefully en route to my 'hizzous' soon. Even then the computers dont use WordPerfect, they use MS Works. My friends, I have no idea when I will post chapter 15, or anything else for that matter! Hopefully in a week or two. I must have wronged the computer gods or something! This can't be happening. . . my word . . . This can NOT be happening!!

June/6/1944 (lol just kidding, 2009)- Freedom! I got my documents off the old hard drive of the dead computer and onto my new flash drive. So now chapter 15 is on the beaches and assulting the axis beach-heads.

July/8/2009- Chapter 16 has been posted, it's a rather lengthy one, so pack a drink and a sandwich. Personally I like this chapter in alot of ways, has elements of alot of things rolled into one. Tomorrow is my birthday so that's awesome! Back to work. I actually started chapter 17 before posting 16, got sorta' carried away.

July/26/2009- Finally done with chapter 17. Typed most of it on the new computer (that runs amazing by the way). Also a new keyboard that is excellent, doesn't make a huge deal of noise when I type. 18 might be out rather soon, or not, getting the good old wisdom teeth removed. Sorta' disappointing though, could use the extra wisdom (L-M-A-O, what a hilarious pun! Oh boy am I funny). Also my self esteem is running high, you can probably tell. Either I'm beginning to be extremely full of myself, or I might have fallen for this girl. I prefer the latter. . . I don't even know why I'm telling you guys this. I don't even tell my brother this. . . Does loosing sleep thinking about this girl normal or slightly disturbing? (I can not believe this is actually happening to me. I'm supposed to be this hardcore, skip the teen bullshit person. . . but her smile. . . wow, I'm loosing it, I'm loosing the edge man. . .).

August/2/2009- Chapter 18 is finished and posted. It's about that time where this story will come to a close. I have one last "chapter" before Forgotten Legacy is completed. It was tough writing 18 though, cause the predicament in the post above this one still stands. . . I'm getting to where I can't think straight, it's all very confusing. Not to mention my "hardboiled" edge has all but completely vanished! Hopefully 18 provides enough 'grit' that you have grown accustom to. I really need to just shut this out if I want to keep writing.

August/13/2009- Forgotten Legacy is now completed. It's sort of bitter sweet as you can imagine. I will go back and edit stuff but other than that, it is done. Not sure what I'll do next, maybe take a break, but breaks are boring. Got a lot of real life things on my plate at the moment, maybe I'll deal with those.


October/21/2009- I'm back guys, hope it wasn't too long. If you think that I took this time to relax and not worry about writing, your wrong. I've been busy like no one's business. I'm not going to spill the beans just yet, but what I am going to do is tell you that I've had something in the works for this site since August 14 (I know, I'm a total loser for typing that long). Prepare to read, the beginning of next month.


October/24/2009- Oh yes, a new story. Zombieland for the win my friends! If you like humor, horror, and zombies watch the movie twice then read my story! Then everyone elses under "zombieland"! (There's only 10, it's not that much. You can devote a few hours to a good cause). But alas, this isn't even a glimps of what I have in store. No no, this is but a story that I started a week ago. All Obliteration nation updates will go between this line and the next one I will put up soon.

October/29/2009- Chapter 2 is done and posted! It is very late and I am very tired. I will say that writting this story is alot of fun and the effort is worth it, as always. I wrote two chapters this go around, so I have chapter 3 half way done the writting process. Enjoy the awesome zombieness! The next update will be soon, provided Borderlands doesn't keep me too occupied.

November/3/2009- Oh yes, but of course. Another chapter to Obliteration Nation down. Please enjoy it and have a fair bit of laughter here and there, for my sake. Next chapter maybe delayed slightly. Registration for classes has started and I need to freak a leak. . . wait.

November/19/2009- Oh jeez, forgot to update the updates last night when I posted the fourth chapter of ON. Between writing a 60 page design doc for game design and programming homework, not to mention a psychology essay, I got a bit caught up. But there is good news out of the madness; I was on a roll for a couple evenings and managed to write all of chapter 4 and chapter 5. So after I do a bit more and edit it, chapter 5 should be up soon.

November/29/2009- Chapter 5 completed. Took a little longer than I let on because I got carried away with chapter 6. So 6 is done but I'll give you all some time to read 5 before I post it.

December/2/2009- I, along with everyone at Obliteration Nation would like to say, Seasons beatings! It's that time of year again, and chapter 6 is up to show for it (which contents have nothing to do with the holidays). Chapter 7 will be a quick one like this, I'm on a writing spree.

December/5/2009- Told you guys it would be fast. Chapter 7 done and done. I have to write two gigantic papers for school now so don't get too cozy with the fast paced chapter writing.

December/19/2009- Wow, that took longer than I hoped. Chapter 8 = ready for reading. Went and watched Avatar (epic movie), so that slowed the posting down. Schools out for winter break so I have chapter 9 half way done.

January/01/2010- Happy new year! Strange that I'm typing this again, seemed like just yesterday. . . Anyway, Chapter 9 of Obliteration Nation is finished and posted. Sorry that it's a wee bit small and not too, too much going on. It's because when I originally wrote chapter 9, it was 10 pages long @,@. So I broke it into two chapters where it made the most sense, Chap-10 will be up as soon as I revise it.

February/01/2010- Finally got numba' 10 up. Sorry for that wait, it was just sitting in my files waiting to be edited. I purchased and beat Mass Effect 2, that was the main reason I didn't get around to writing (Excellent game by the way. A must have. Game of the year). That and the start of college semester 2. I'm going to ease back into writing so the next chapter is going to be up sooner, as apposed to never. Don't worry, I'm still planning on finishing Obliteration Nation, it'll just take a little longer.

March/23/2010- My god! Finally an update! Whew that was a really long absence. . . Sorry about that. The usual time consumers when it comes to student life. Chapter 12 is up and 13 is about 75 through the writing phase. So bare with me good guys and gals (alliterations ftw). Also, if you can guess the reference to the chapters name. . . I might add something into Obliteration Nation via your suggestion. That sounds like fun!

May/15/10- Summer is here and my schooling is as nonexistent as the dinosaurs. I have 13 still under construction, since the last time I even looked at it was late March. Anyway just a reminder that I am back and sooner rather than later you guys will be getting the next installment from me.

June/3/10- Finally have chapter 13 up, apologizes for it's relatively short length. Still a tad busy with the "hanging out with friends" bit of summer, but we'll all get sick of each other in a week and thus allow more time for me to write. Shout out to all that read this! I'm not on a radio show, but anyway - Next song coming up; Daft Punk, Around the world! . . . Around the world, around the woorld. Ok I'll stop blatantly goofing off on my profile page.

December/23/10- Holy cow has it really been that long? Honestly it felt like just two weeks ago I was writing, turns out, it's been half a friggin' year. I am definitely not used to being an adult... Still. Anyway, college semester 3 accomplished and with it Chapter 14 of Obliteration Nation. And hey, it's the holidays again, interesting.

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Fade To Black by R-I-C-A-R-D reviews
Post Sovereign. Captured by batarians, Shepard finds herself an unwilling participant in a brutal form of 'sport.' Her very survival is at stake as her captors aim to increase falling ratings. Complete.
Mass Effect - Rated: M - English - Adventure - Chapters: 8 - Words: 33,785 - Reviews: 37 - Favs: 15 - Follows: 10 - Updated: 3/27/2009 - Published: 1/28/2009 - J. Garson - Complete
Dead Rising: A Chronicle Untold by KatieTheKillerOfZombies reviews
Kasey finds herself in the town of Willamette, Colorado only to be trapped amidst herds of zombies! Her story reveals what happens to certain characters before Frank even meets them, and events that occur on the other side of the conspiracy.
Dead Rising - Rated: T - English - Horror/Suspense - Chapters: 6 - Words: 6,094 - Reviews: 12 - Favs: 8 - Follows: 8 - Updated: 7/15/2007 - Published: 1/14/2007
An Unbroken Skyline by lxzc2 reviews
Zelda is a pickpocket, surviving on the streets after escaping from the palace under unknown circumstances. Link is a merchant who tracks down his stolen purse, only to find that his thief is wounded and needs protecting... [Link x Zelda]
Legend of Zelda - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 3 - Words: 5,449 - Reviews: 17 - Favs: 9 - Follows: 9 - Updated: 7/12/2007 - Published: 6/10/2007 - Zelda, Link
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Obliteration nation reviews
A 19 year-old kid journeys to New York with great ambitions. One of which has to do with the nuke in the back seat. The others, he has to cross all of zombieland to find out. Will he be able to make it to one of the most zombie infested areas on earth?
Zombieland - Rated: M - English - Humor/Horror - Chapters: 14 - Words: 54,650 - Reviews: 14 - Favs: 9 - Follows: 6 - Updated: 12/23/2010 - Published: 10/23/2009
Forgotten Legacy reviews
After going to the past,taking a 21st century marine with her, Shepard is tormented by a sinister slaver lord seeking to capture her.Failing the last 2 attempts he is crazed to get her. Can she strike down this malice and bring the marine home?Col/WarHero
Mass Effect - Rated: M - English - Sci-Fi/Drama - Chapters: 19 - Words: 67,995 - Reviews: 13 - Favs: 7 - Follows: 10 - Updated: 8/12/2009 - Published: 1/6/2008 - J. Garson - Complete
Hunters and Healers reviews
Being a medic and hunter isn't easy, but when the city of Alsburg is struck by a mysterious illness Riku will have to forsake his hunter ways to quell this deadly virus... if he only had the money... T for language and violence
Monster Hunter - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 813 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Published: 7/26/2007
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