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Video game reviews: New games are added as I get them, for now:

I got Sonic Unleashed on the PS2 a while ago, and I decided to review it, but I'm just now getting around to it.

Graphics: 4 out of 5

Voice Acting 2 out of 5

Story: Not even going to rate it

Music: 5 out of 5

Gameplay: Hedgehog: 4 out of 5, Werehog: 3 out of 5

Replay value: 2 out of 5

Over all: 3 out of 5

Last Word: Not as bad as Sonic Next Gen, but not as good as Sonic Adventure 2.

Here's my review for SatBK:

Graphics: 4.5 out of 5

Voice Acting: 3 out of 5

Story: 4 out of 5 (best since Sonic Adventure 2, but not as good)

Music: 5 out of 5

Replay Value: 4 out of 5

Over All: 4 out of 5

Last Word: I do believe Sonic's return to greatness is finally here.

Sonic the Hedgehog 4 review:

Okay, so, yeah, review(PS3):

Graphics: 5 out of 5

Voice Acting: NA

Story: NA

Music: 3 out of 5

Gameplay: 3 out of 5

Overall: 3 out of 5

Last Word: The past won't offer redemption, try the future SEGA.

News: Shadow Ends It will be done before the end of summer.

Scoring system:

I like to give a story a score when reviewing it.

1 out of 5: A VERY BAD STORY!! This score is for a story with a story line I can't understand, bad spelling and little effort shown. I don't like giving this score and will avoid it when I can, but it maybe possible to get this score, though it would have to be the worst thing I've ever read.

2 out of 5: A bad story. This score is for a story with an okay story line, but everything else is bad. Again, I will avoid giving this score when ever possible, but I will give it.

3 out of 5: A story. This score is for a story that is readable, but not enjoyable, like reading it is a chore, or, it has nothing new, all ideas have been used, but you can change how you tell it. This is a common one and just means you need to show a bit more effort.

4 out of 5: A good story. This is for an enjoyable story that has one big flaw that keeps it from being great, such as; it's too short, needs spell-check, hard to read, and so on. I'll use this one for a lot of stories that I think can be better.

5 out of 5: A VERY GOOD STORY!! This score doesn't mean a story's perfect, but pretty close, they have some flaws that are easily over looked. You have to work your butt off to get this score, I wouldn't even give one of my stories this score!

Here are a few things I just found, but have true messages:

Homophobia and You: They're people too! Stop the hate and spread the love!
I am the girl kicked out of her home because I confided in my mother that I am a lesbian.
I am the prostitute working the streets because nobody will hire a transsexual woman.
I am the sister who holds her gay brother tight through the painful, tear-filled nights.
We are the parents who buried our daughter long before her time.
I am the man who died alone in the hospital because they would not let my partner of twenty-seven years into the room.
I am the foster child who wakes up with nightmares of being taken away from the two fathers who are the only loving family I have ever had. I wish they could adopt me.
I am one of the lucky ones, I guess. I survived the attack that left me in a coma for three weeks, and in another year I will probably be able to walk again.
I am not one of the lucky ones. I killed myself just weeks before graduating high school. It was simply too much to bear.
We are the couple who had the realtor hang up on us when she found out we wanted to rent a one-bedroom for two men.
I am the person who never knows which bathroom I should use if I want to avoid getting the management called on me.
I am the mother who is not allowed to even visit the children I bore, nursed, and raised. The court says I am an unfit mother because I now live with another woman.
I am the domestic-violence survivor who found the support system grow suddenly cold and distant when they found out my abusive partner is also a woman.
I am the domestic-violence survivor who has no support system to turn to because I am male.
I am the father who has never hugged his son because I grew up afraid to show affection to other men.
I am the home-economics teacher who always wanted to teach gym until someone told me that only lesbians do that.
I am the man who died when the paramedics stopped treating me as soon as they realized I was transsexual.
I am the person who feels guilty because I think I could be a much better person if I did not have to always deal with society hating me.
I am the man who stopped attending church, not because I don't believe, but because they closed their doors to my kind.
I am the person who has to hide what this world needs most, love.
I am the person who is afraid of telling his loving Christian parents he loves another male.
Re-post this if you believe homophobia is wrong. Please do your part to end it.

Okay I recently found this on someone's profile; this story is so sad. And it's true, I've never read Alice's work but no one deserves to die cause of a drunk driver. Please put this in your profile and add your name to the list.

I went to a party, Mom
And remembered what you said.
You told me not to drink, Mom
So I had a Sprite instead.

I felt proud of myself,
The way you said I would,
That I didnt drink and drive,
Though some friends said I should.

I made a healthy choice,
And your advice to me was right,
The party finally ended,
And the kids drove out of sight.

I got into my car,
Sure to get home in one piece,
I never knew what was coming, Mom
Something I expected least.

Now Im lying on the pavement,
And I hear the policeman say,
The kid that caused this wreck was drunk,
Mom, his voice seems far away.

My own bloods all around me,
As I try hard not to cry.
I can hear the paramedic say,
This girl is going to die.

Im sure the guy had no idea,
While he was flying high,
Because he chose to drink and drive,
Now I would have to die.

So why do people do it, Mom
Knowing that it ruins lives?
And now the pain is cutting me,
Like a hundred stabbing knives.

Tell sister not to be afraid, Mom
Tell daddy to be brave,
And when I go to heaven,
Put Daddys Girl on my grave.

Someone should have taught him,
That it's wrong to drink and drive.
Maybe if his parents had,
Id still be alive.

My breath is getting shorter, Mom
Im getting really scared.
These are my final moments,
And Im so unprepared.

I wish that you could hold me Mom,
As I lie here and die.
I wish that I could say I love you, Mom
So I love you and good-bye.

one message: dont drink and drive!

The following was at the bottom of the poem, not my words.

Do you see what I'm talking about? I am officially starting an autograph list in memory of Alice. If you care, copy and paste and sign your name under mine below, You can leave a message if you want.

Nick, aka DisjointWinter