I love this! This is really well written and I like how it is not the normal JackxElsa fanfic. The story flows quite well. I am also fond of the syfy additions to it, it really takes on a different perspective and make one, or at least it makes me, think. :) Keep it up.

love love love your writing! can't wait for the next chapter of Man in the Moon, if there will be one

Huehue Puerto Prinsesa huh. I'm gonna guess that you're Filipino because it says Asian in your profile too *kaway kaway* anyway, this story is very interesting. You know those moments where we just want to leave a review but have nothing to say? That's me right now.

Kudos!

Great chapter! Please continue I'm begging you! It's getting better and better as I read it!

I just read this, and I must say that you are a great writer! Better than me! It's fun to read and I really liked that you went into detail! Keep it up! :):)

Raj this is amazing! Very creative and beautifully done! I kind of kicked myself for not having the chance to read this earlier since I've known for you a while. Definitely keep this up, it's really great stuff. :D

Woah...

I'm in deep awe, that was amazing! I'm a little air-headed, but will there be a third chapter? And considering English isn't your mother language, you do very well. And, in what time is this? But, I must admit, this is an amazing story.

Heart it 1,000s!
#OctieHigh

That was beautiful. I truly enjoyed it. You are an amazing writer! I hope you write another Jelsa fic soon. :)

really great i love it even if i cried while reading it! I think Elsa is pissed with Hans because he knows she's hiding something and he wants to find out what it is and he wants Elsa for him self? please update this! its just amazing!

That is one hell of a long story. Lol. You see, I am simply one HELL of a fangirl.

Sorry! I forgot to also mention in my review:
- your oneshot was really good and I think you should continue it as well. You seem like you have more ideas for it but you restrained yourself. It would be really interesting to see how they got together and also how they continue managing their relationship.
- there were some random full stops and other stuff in the review because I tried making faces but realized too late that the website won't recognize it.
- any help you need I am willing to do!
- I like read/watch Naruto too.

This review will probably drown in all the reviews you have received and you probably won't read it yet considering that I'm late to the party. 0.0

But I just had to comment on your rad writing skills for this story. How you actually came up with this whole new world and concept in your head is completely mind blowing that you would put in that much effort. I really appreciate the pride you take in your work.

Your descriptions of the place makes it sound so beautiful and real in my head. Your command of language and your vocabulary is really good and you write better than I ever could even though my first language is English.

You sound like you really need to be immersed in your writing and once you are, everything completely flows perfectly. You just have to be in the mood or it doesn't work. I totally respect that and await your updates!

This is only the second time I've ever reviewed anything because I usually like to just hide in the corners -.-", the only other story I reviewed was in this crossover category and called "Hijacked" (love the pun). Which is not seen by many people but starts out pretty engaging. SORRY I WENT OFF TOPIC!

Anyway, I really think the way you developed the characters was very interesting and made the possibility of a relationship between their characters more believable. I mean at first when I saw this ship I thought it was super creative and awesome, but as I thought more about it I really wasn't sure there would be chemistry between the two characters or how they would work out. But you made it believable and you made it awesome. o You also managed to do this without changing the characters main core. You really managed to understand the character.

Special mention to the story that you said Jack wrote. I really liked the imagery created with the woman singing and everything.

So props to you for everything and I do hope you update soon!
(PS don't worry your grammar is perfect. If you need someone to go through it though, I wouldn't mind) .

It was a little hard to get through at first, but I love how descriptive the story is, and how well you describe each character. The theme and setting is just absolutely creative. You're a better writer than most authors and novelist I know. I also enjoyed the one-shot, full of romance yet angst, it's bittersweet but it still gives you the reassurance that they will be together. You're a very talented writer.

OH MAH GAHHH! I know it says that Moonlight Waltz is supposed to be a oneshot but please please please change that! It was such a good story with such interesting plot development, but I feel like there could be more. I really wanna hear about both Jack and Elsa's character development while they were away and how they got together in high school and how Elsa changed him and how their relationship grew! And not just Jelsa stuff but I like how you included a little of Kristanna and I'd like to see them more too! And why does Elsa dislike Hans so much? (well that's what I got from it at least haha. I just really feel like you could do more than a oneshot with what you have here, but of course it's your story and your decision and this is just a really hopeful suggestion aha. I will say that some of the flashbacks and "scene changes"? were a but hard to follow, but other than that I really like this and was amazed with how detailed it was, plot wise and just overall. Thank you for this wonderful read. Hope to see more soon :)

I automatically thought of the gentlemans alliance when reading this chapter and comes to show that hey I was right haha :D

And whew...it sure gets steamy between them two, love it!

Sky