YOU ARE AND AMAZING ARE WRIGHT ABOUT THE WOMEN PART,I LOVED IT.

I seriously love this and, full disclosure, I would LOVE a sequel - I need to know if Ruby finds love, how the travel between the two worlds goes, do they find Rumple, and honestly I full on ship Ruby and Tink together - will you ever do a sequel?

Very good story. Really enjoyed reading.

re reading this and loving this fic! u still rock.

Good

Loved the stuff between Emma and regina. I just wish that you would have wrote ruby and belle together at the end. Luke she came back after a year and the talked while she was gone and belle fell for her. Maybe they never did find rumble. Part of it seemed left off.

I was born upon this earth so I could read and be in love with this chapter of this fic. I mean, like, FUCKING SWOON.

I know that this was written so long ago that you're probably not going going to even see this review, but I wanted to let you know that I am reading this and was really affected by this chapter, and I really loved Snow's reaction to what she saw. This was really well written and I have all the feels right now.
thank you,
xxoo,
W

is there more? i wanna know if they find rumple? what happens to ruby? what of this baby? the trip to fairy tale land? i need more!

AHHH LOVE

Maybe I'm being overly sensitive, but I'm not a huge fan of the emphasis on Regina and much of the town, including Ruby, attending Church. It's been mentioned at least twice in as many chapters. First off, it feels a little like you're pushing religion, which is discomfiting. Second, it seems to me that Regina would feel the same way about an all-powerful deity as she does about the fairies who refused to help her during her childhood, which is to say she'd have a strong aversion, if not all-out hatred.

I just have to point out, because this pained my STEM soul:
The product of a real negative number and a real positive number is negative, but it is not true that all "engagements" between positive and negative elements have a negative result. The simplest example: -1 2 1.

But, otherwise, I'm enjoying the story.

This was a great story. With regard to Emma calling Regina woman, I didn't particularly like it, not for any political reason I just didn't feel an emotional impact as I would with darling ect..But you can't like everything in a story and this one had plenty more things to like. I think you did a great job with Regina's struggles with darkness.

I love this! Thanks for sharing with us, I love how loving they were to each other. Love your story! Xxxx

oh come on you really didn't just do that my gosh I thought ruby was going to find someone stupid fucking belle it was a awesome story but super disappointed ruby didn't get anyone that's so not fair like I mean she pushed emma to talk to regina about her feelings then you drop the bomb that ruby is in love with belle then its like hey ruby has been taking care of you for fucking months over a broken heart. then rumple comes back and it's like fuck you ruby I dont care about your feelings like come on why did ruby have to have go through so much pain and then get denied a happy ending gosh. anyway it was a amazing story but as you can tell ruby is my favorite character I dint like how she didn't get a happy ending. I loved your swanqueen and I was pleasantly suprised how snow was ok with it because usually in fics she hates how emma falls for regina i loved alot allot of this story it was super fluffy but it also had the serious parts the completed the story thank you for the lovely story still angered ruby didn't get a happy ending but still loved the storu