I see you finally posted chapter 21 to AO3. We gonna be seeing 22 soon? That'd be awesome

I really hope that you haven't abandoned this. This is building up nicely and I would love to read more.

Thanks

Great story, looking forward to more.

Loving the story so far.
Here's hoping you're still around.
Have a great day readers.

Really hope you keep up with this!

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Hey, excellent job. More please :).

Harley Quinn
Legendary king Leonidas and his 300 escorts
Very nice, very nice

sorry the begining of this chapter confused the hell out of me it seemed to come up from nowhere and it never itraduced or showed the first meeting with aegwynn but still a good chapter but left me feeling the first bit is missing still

So far the story is pretty enjoyable, even for someone like me that doesn't really know anything about WOW. I will say that the Harem is distracting and feels unnecessary, using it to create a context for romance with new races understandably, but over all it feel like moments of teenage hormones injected into an otherwise somber toned story.

Whilst. Whilst, whilst, whilst, whilst—whilst-whilst, whilst. .

You've used the gods damned word so many times, it makes me genuinely wonder if you know how to type "while" at all. In fact, the FIRST time you've managed to type the word throughout the entirety of the story you've written is, in-fact, this chapter, using it in the word "erstwhile" of all things. You don't start a sentence with "whilst," you don't have "whilst" feature as prominently as a common word like "a", "I", "the", and more. "Whilst" is "while still", and you have it placed in so many damnable places that it makes me wonder what sort of education you were brought up with. You even go so far as to slap it in the most inconsistent of places, wherein Harry will be doing something for the "first" time, yet you'll go and say "Whilst Harry strolled through the capital city of (Nameholder Race Here)," even though it is his FIRST DAMN TIME in what ever hypothetical place he's in.

Christ almighty, no one wants to read the same thing being said over and over again.

Shitty Mary Sue villain alert! Everyone who hates that shit, avoid the story, and author, please tell in the summary, what you include overpowered OC's and other boring bullshit like that.

"...WE MARCH FOR THE AXE! [Balck Axe Fortress] AND WE SHALL HOLD NO HATE!" "KILL THE DOOOOGGGGG!." When Harry meets Varimathras also love your fic

You seem to have forgotten that everyone should be reacting to the Draenei and screaming "Eredar!".

Great chapter good to see an update :D