Why are you calling her an “elemental” instead of the Avatar. Yes, she can bend the elements but she isn’t an “elemental.” Since you’re doing a slight crossover with using The Last Airbender, is point reference to her. Maybe, make it actually be.
She’s already been jntodoss the Avatar and Jonas even said it and blah, blah.
Sooooo, don’t cross them out. AND!
I meant to put this in the last few chaps, but when she went shopping for clothes. Her tattooes would have been visible when she tried on the dresses... sooo later you making it like Klaus would only see her tattoos at the Lagoon... didn’t add up. There are other small things in this don’t add up or are crossed out by the double negative and standards but... seeing as you haven’t updated this in 2 years ima assume it’s been abandoned?

Personally I would like to be a vampire. But an old one. I always wanted to visit New Zealand and London and if I could change a death in vampire diaries it would be Kol. Probably would have killed Stefan in his place or Elena. Yes I really don't like them. (The answers to the questions I could remember)

Now to your story. How sweet are Ayris and Klaus? I read the kiss scenes like 100 times. They are so adorable. I like that Elijah is like a brother to her please don't ruin that. But I like the idea of Katarina thinking that there is more. I was so sad that there wasn't a next chapter. It was a cliffhanger.
Kol in love with Ayris. Personally I would like the idea but I don't think he deserves to be put in this situation. He went through enough. I would really like to know how you want to go with the hybrid sire problem. Will Elena still have to give her blood?
Can Hayley NOT get pregnant from Klaus? (Maybe Elijah oder Finn oder Kol than she would still be a Mikaelson ) But Klaus would have need sex with Haley in less then a Year an I couldn't imagine Ayris just sitting there and accepting that her boyfriend had sex with someone else. Especially after what we already know about her past (that is one point I never like in fanfics). Especially if Haley stayes with the Originals. It is everlasting heart break waiting.
On a happier note I ship Kol and Bonnie. Or a friendship between Bonnie and Ayris because they can relate with nature ( Kol being an exwarlock and Ayris being the avatar). And I like that Bonnie becomes this badass witch that she so could be but never got the chance in the series. (Till season 4)
Will Ayris become a Vampire? Can she keep her powers than? Because in the moment she is this complete powerhouse that never uses her powers to actually defend herself ( how stupid is that?) and if she becomes just a normal baby vamp it would be just sad. And she wouldn't survive a week in New Orleans as a normal baby vamp. But I want her and Nik to spend eternity together.
I hope you can guess that I really like your story and hope you will continue.
Till the next time

I just watched to the middle of season 4 but in my opinion it was Caroline. At least to that point. She was this annoying girl that was shallow and cared just for herself and in this three seasons alone she grew up. She lost everything and had to fight to get where she stands know. Personally I think Tyler does not deserv her.
But I am not a Klaroline fan. She used him to long and played with his feelings. But I can totally see them as friends

By the way to this point (chapter 7) I love your story and I will probably not sleep till I finished. Your writing style is very good. But I have a question. If she is as powerful as Aang from Avatar, why did she not use all her powers (or at least one more element) to defeat Damon in the beginning? Or in later fights as well ( not when she was shot that was obvious ). But like I said love your story so far and I will see if I write for every chapter a short review or on long in the end...
But I will probably answer questions to the show but like I said I haven't reached the end of season 4 jet. Don't know if I ever will I really can't stand Elena and Stefan. Not just as couple but there Characters them self (the Ripper is brilliant though)

Love your story so far though there are mistakes here and there but could easily be ignored. Though wanted to let you know you added toph in along with the other girls when explaining about her eyes and how toph compliments on them but she cannot since she is blind. Just wanted to let you know. Anyways; amazing story.

I hope you continue because I love the story

Oh I'm so glad you're coming back and not leaving us hanging on what's to come. Take your time about editing your story, I know the feeling. When I write my story down on paper an then type it up on my computer I have to edit it and fix my grammar. Can't wait for future chapters and all your muse glory. Happy writing :).

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Brooke chapter 16 . Dec 21, 2015
This story is amazing. I know you can't update anytime soon, but again great story *mental thumps up*. Happy writing :).

This story is amazing. I know you can't update anytime soon, but again great story (mental thumps up).

Hi! I'm Turkish and temel doesn't mean elemental in Turkish. It means main and sorry for grammer mistakes. I'm only a reader.

Hope you continue, this is very unique.

Love this story.

Great chapter. ! : )

Aw, good chapter.

Good chapter, I would go to Italy, and Ireland.

Great chapter. Probably a bartender, I'll hope for him to be a male stripper