Interesting story... almost wish there was a follow up to it. Oh well, for what it is, it was a good story.

That was... really good! In a twisted sort of way..

It's not that bad. you don't have to hide under your bed. It's actually pretty good.

Man, that was good; I couldn't tear my eyes away from it! You did a great job with this story!

3 Spirit

Whoa O.O I like it

I like but...um well your summary doesn't make sense and Light isn't a teenager. Other than that it was very well written and easy to love.

I like this :)