This chapter is the BEST chapter till now.

when i found out he was visiting his dad, i thought im so gonna start crying at some point in this episode. I made a promise to myself not to cry.
I broke my promise and cried
Only the best authors can make me cry in a fanfic, so thats obviously what you are... Amazing story

Anou ne, i know this is kinda a bad time but... who's taking care of happy? did he just like escape when motherfucking jude arrived? or did he hide? BUT WHERE'S HAPPY?

you are one of the best authors i have read. i literally started crying. i dont know how to phrase what im thinking... but... just wow

Jackass Laxus or Lax-Ass, hahaha ... no? Ok, I know where the door is.

Great chapter. Lots of drama.

Another great chapter! It's heartbreaking what happened with Lucy. Hope Natsu can get her help.

Great first chapter!

This is such a well-written fan fiction. Your writing style is something I aspire to achieve. Really good job!

You are an incredible writer. I cried like never before. Thank youso much for sharing this breath-taking work with us.

This was one of the best nalu stories of there you are awesome and I really had fun reading this so all I have to say is keep writing and enjoying your life

this was litterally so cute oml... I'm crying lmao

i love this. The way you write and the way your telling the story is amazing!

Your story is just, amazing. I have almost no words to describe what is written in these chapters. I don't want to ramble, so I'll make this quick: although the story itself was heartbreaking, YOU are ab amazing author, and I would love to someday read an original book written by you.

You are an amazing writer. So many twists and turns. You made the Fairy Tail AU come to life. The characters were perfect to a t. Keep at it! I look forward to reading all your other work.