How could you have ended it there it is an incredible story that I pray will be continue.

So naruto is a bitch and hinata is the pimp fucked up

UpdaaaaTE

This is too OCC on both Naruto's and Hinata's part.

Ok, please do us all a favor and continue if and when you can.

Loved it though I wish you didn't stop the fic when Naruto was basically killed, I also I like how you don't seem to be redeeming Sasuke anytime soon.

Please continue I want to see Naruto's team and Kakashi get bashed.

This was a great story and I have never read anything like it before and want to see how it ends.

Naruto and Hinata Forever:)

Oh My God that was amazing.

I really loved it Hinata Naruto love, Hinata become a bad ass, her bashing and taking over the Hyuga clan you are genius. I hope Hinata turns her wrath on Naruto team next.

Naruto and Hinata Forever:)

annnnd cock-blocked by another story that seems abandoned such a shame it had such promise as a story

chapters good hopeing you update soon

I don't like the way you said it, so I'll stop reading. Dipshit.

I really love this story, and I hope you continue it soon, but there is one thing I don't get. When Modon insults Hinata, Naruto goes crazy and Hinata tells him to let her fight her own battles, but when Hanabi insult Naruto, Hinata goes crazier right away. Seems kinda hypocritical.

Plz update soon, really enjoyed the story so far

Not a bad reversal of roles. Though they are quite young for some of their actions.

God I had wondered what happened to this story. Its still good even after all this time.

I stopped after chapter two. Child sex, really? !?