I've read the first chapter and all I have to say is to use pence instead of cents, pounds instead of bucks, and pound land instead of 99 cents store.

Please update your story soon!

July 31.
Also I like magical history.

I wish you would have continued the story, it had quite a few different elements that were put together in a unique way. Thank-you for sharing.

No está mal.
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Not bad.

I love Hermione.

revive and update this please it's really interesting

Seems you posting speed slowed even more then you expected. Either that or your muse for this took a vacation that hasn't ended yet. I do find it interesting so would very much like for you to continue it. But I do understand, schoolwork/homework come first. If you go back and edit this, I suggest you tell the reader of a time skip in the story. You had me very confused when as far as I know Harry is still seven years old but somehow got his Hogwarts letter. Also in the first chapter you said Harry ran away when he was seven but in this one you said eight. That's one of the hardest things to do over a story is keep everything straight. Well hope you post to this soon. Thanks for the entertainment and try to keep writing.

Well, if I remember correctly it's 07/31/1980. Now to the story. I really pity Harry having to go back to that backwards country. And I don't mean the No-mag part! I just can't wrap my mind around how they could have the best magic school in the world yet be so lost in time. Think about it. The rest of the world uses pens, pencils and paper. The magical world in Britain still uses quills and parchment. Then there's the teaching methods imployed in Hogwash. Rote memorizations. Don't question anything just do as told.

Well, Harry still needs his owl and likely other thing that absolutely MUST be bought in Diagon Ally. Can't have the Boy-Who-Lived showing up at Hogwash with school books, wand and other supplies form outside the country now can they?! I do hope Harry avoids that MoooRon with the red hair! Ron's like the pipes and such on the set of ST:NG. Goes nowhere, does nothing. You'd have to rewrite his whole personality before he'd be worth being Harry's best friend. I suspect that Kevin had his tongue firmly in cheek when he described the British magical schools as the best in the world. How could they possibly be if their society is lost in the eighteenth century?

Now that is so much better than Diagon Ally. Though the bags on the heads is a bit strange. Though I truly doubt they're truly bags. It's most likely that when Harry returns to the UK, he's not gonna be happy living in the eighteenth century. The British magical world is so lost in time! Some people may think it'd be cool to live back then but strand them there for six months to a year and they'll quickly change their minds! With Harry being a hacker why would he want to stay in Hogwash for more then the first term? Very Likely he'd flee to America at Christmas break. Assuming of course that the ol' brainless bearded wonder blunder allowed him out of the school that is.

I like that line " Want some porkchops? "! Seems the ol' brainless bearded wonder blunder wants his weapon back. Harry's only supposed to be seven and yet he got his Hogwash letter. Something very fishy there. What's the possibility that the ol' brainless bearded wonder blunder wants to return to his abusers?

And yet again the ol' brainless bearded wonder blunder strikes again! That old fraud wouldn't know safe if it beat him to death! Dumbledore is a Dark Lord masquerading as the Leader of the Light. Harry's living conditions prove that! No true Light wizard would simply place a child in a home where they were warned wasn't good and walk away. Also ignore anything about the child for ten years with no check up. Thus Dark as Dark can be!

Really nice. Please continue. If possible

Oh yes because Harry totally knows what a fuse is... Really fucking reatarted go die in a hole and take this piece of shit with you