That is good . Great work .

Great job, really shows the emotional side if Dick well.

This is a really good piece! I like the imagery inside, and the feelings. Of course, when Bruce finally gets his head out of the gutter, it's too late for anything else.

Usually seeing Dick as a cheery goof who loves his brothers makes this fic kinda weird, in a good way. Its refreshing.
Poor Dick :(

YES. Wow, this is really good! The emotion was definetly there. The only thing I noticed is that I think you forgot to skip a line between your paragraphs? Maybe you didn't, or you did, but it doesn't really matter. Your writing was superb and I hope you create a sequel to this! It deserves one!

Now THAT was excellent. Amazing job well done. The angst was awesome;)

Nice dude. Like for real that was amazing! .