Great chapter. I dont think 'nothing happened' in it. For me, this fic is one of those slowly but powerfully burning ones. And Snips is my favourite female character, besides Ventress and Mara Jade, so im very happy you gave her a larger role.

It's funny how smart children that sees another smart child are quick to say "You don't act like a kid" while blindly ignoring themselves. Heck, I really don't think the phrase "You don't act like a kid" should be uttered by a Jedi initiate. Ironically, you author note at the end of this chapter about all the classes is just further proof of how the phrase could be seen as a bit too forced perhaps, or at least severely out of place.

One of the things I like most about you as a writer is that you’ve actually finished this. It reads like a book and I’m happy to know that you still haven’t abandoned it. With how invested I am already in this story, it would be an absolute shame.

Heck, this one is a sequel too? Darn it

It was a little weird but this is in anakins perspectives and yehe knows of France. can you make it NOAA Martin as french

This is such an amazing series. I haven’t been able to put it down! I’m amazed at all your insights into Anakin/Vadar’s character and how the dark side actually works! Your analysis of the psychology behind how and why he fell and how and why he escaped is just awesome, and I love how much effort and research you’ve clearly put into this. You asked for concrit, and honestly the only thing I’ve caught is sometimes Yoda’s speech doesn’t seem quite right to me - but that could simply be because I’ve only seen the movies and never read the books. I may just not have enough background to know what ‘right’ is for his backwards speech. Great job and I’ll definitely be checking out more of the series!

And, maybe it’s terrible, but I’m kind of desperately hoping Anakin gives up on his determination to avoid Padme so that Leia and Luke can still exist... It would be such a beautiful happy ending if he could actually have a real family. But then you might not find that realistic, so I’ll just wait and see where you go with this.

I'm really loving this series. My friend recommended it about 3 days ago and I've been bingeing it ever since. I love how you are exploring the consequences of smushing and denying emotions in the Jedi. And the line that the kid tells Anakin.. "No one is as mean to you as you"... that really got me. I'm like that with me. Empathizing with Anakin is weirdly, helping me to empathize with myself. So, thank you very much for writing this story.

That was a fantastic chapters in terms of emotions and narration!

The end of the chapter waiting for me round the corner just after the funny way Anakin led the interview with Mac: I'm going to ruin that reader's whole carreer.

Coira is a smart and kind kid, Anakin explaining almost his entire past to her was not something I had seen coming but feels consistent with his characterization so far. That said yeah it must have been a stressfull week.

Congrats on Coira nailing it but hearing Anakin guffaw must have been a sight for his friends.

I didn't expect Ahsoka AT ALL but it was a very pleasant surprise.

Hik'te is fantastic character and I love the session between Master Xio and Anakin.

I love the Dooku-Anakin interractions.

And that's why, kids, you do your essays in advance and not when you're exhausted. At this rate yeah I'm definitely considering on Anakin's classmates figuring out the truth before anyone else.