Reviews for Absolution
multyfangirl21 chapter 17 . 6/29
This is kinda bad if they broke Danny.
multyfangirl21 chapter 16 . 6/28
Shiz, I was hoping he'd become one of the rabid ghouls. Well I still knew there was a chance of him becoming one of the simi stable halfas.
Crud. Well he's being more like fleshed out as a character but I still don't like Z and the fact he has a good chance of getting out now.
multyfangirl21 chapter 15 . 6/27
Well that's sadder than a few other versions I've read.
multyfangirl21 chapter 14 . 6/26
I might look into your Fairytail stories.
multyfangirl21 chapter 13 . 6/26
LOL, poor Youngblood.
What in the world is happening? First the connection between Dani and Grundy and now 1, possibly 3, ghosts that are connected to Danny.
multyfangirl21 chapter 12 . 6/26
Forgot to put this in the previous one but I love Dani's reaction to the result of Youngblood's stunt. And Polly's.
Why is Frostbite sounding like Yoda in this chapter ?
Well theres a simi normal thing that they did, a water war.
multyfangirl21 chapter 11 . 6/25
Nuts, the shadows, light whichever is in charge of ghoul , has achieved a halfa.
Poor Grundy. Agent Z I hope you die one of the most painful deaths... sadly he has a chance of surviving due to stubborn willpower. But his sanity has a lower chance of surviving.
multyfangirl21 chapter 10 . 6/24
The more I contemplate the similarities between Phantom and Batman the more it makes more sense why Batman would see him as a big threat. With someone as epic as Batman the one person that would be the biggest threat to him is his equal. Danny is potentially going to become his equal. So he's a big threat.

I may have next to no knowledge of Jason blood, never saw a movie with the character in it but I do know he's DC and a major authority of the occult that the league counts as an ally, at least sometimes. So first thought is I'm very curious why he's teaching jr high history at Amity park. 2nd thought he's a major authority of the occult, and he's in Amity park major ghost hot spot. Kinda explains itself if you take a moment to think about it. Pretty sure the more violent types of ghosts get grouped with the occult.

LOL, the part where Victor sees the dragon and starts asking shocked questions is hilarious. Reminded of parts of Buffy the Vampire slayer series. It's funny seeing how people get used to crazy things happening in their city.
multyfangirl21 chapter 8 . 6/24
LOL, my sister once managed to burn water , or so our big brother once claimed. All of my siblings and I can cook, but its slightly questionable in some places with our baby brother.
multyfangirl21 chapter 7 . 6/24
Lol, he sounded so casual when he commented that his team was now mentally scarred.
multyfangirl21 chapter 4 . 6/21
Lol, Danny considered Teen titans for their name.
multyfangirl21 chapter 1 . 6/20
Score! I found a good series!
ShineX chapter 16 . 6/19
I still like this way better than the canon situation. Very nicely done :)
ShineX chapter 15 . 6/19
I actually like this outcome quite a bit more than Young Justice canon. With this he chose willingly to go along with Fate, knowing the consequences all the while. In comparison the original had it be a hostage situation, which just pisses you off the more you think about it.
Another factor that makes this quite a bit better is the side effect of using Phantom as the host. If Fate goes against the instinct to protect he will be actively fighting against his host's body. What a way to keep him on the straight and narrow.
Logic Soldier chapter 17 . 11/20/2019
Sigh... This is getting annoying. This story is just 100 different ways to make Danny Suffer. It's getting boring, annoying and repetitive. Should've known you would've used Failsafe as an excuse to abuse Danny some more. Can we go 3 chapters without destroying Danny's world and putting him into another emo depression phase? It seems like you don't know how to write Danny's Character without making him having some kind of Tragedy.
Not even Spider-man, a hero known for having shitty luck and a terrible Like suffers this much this often. Danny seems to get fucked every month with kind of crap and it's honestly not even realistic. It seems like a crunch you have. You don't know how to develop Danny's character beyond Pain and suffering. Every time he overcomes you throw some other shit at him to make his like hell.
I'm still fucking waiting for you to take Danny into a new direction but he's still going through the same arc as he did in Obsession. Do something new and stop jumping to Ansgt to give Danny a Challenge to overcome.
You're a damn good writer and know how to keep interest despite how long this series is but i'm tired of seeing the same thing every few chapters.
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