i think you should, it would be good, and your writing is really good

Ohmygod! That was uber fantastic! It was all angsty and then Toddles got some lovin' Oh yay! I am happy

well, that was special. Keep writing!

I'm so depressed...I want to die. ;.; I wish I had seen more of their relationship before this. *weep weep* So sad! The writing rocked though, and Scott's end was almost Oedipus-esque...well...with the eyes. A fitting end. I mean...*weep weep* THE PAIN! .~

Aw! It was so cute! I just love ScottLance! It was sad but Kawaii! Now, off to read the prequel! JaNe,

Dass-chan _~*

i loved the story, and though i completely dissagree with their deaths, it was well written and i'm kinda lovin u for the story/ hatin u 4 the ending. E-mail me, i'd love to chat. xxx

AWWWWWWW, cute. Continue

Morbid but good!

Its beautifull written.

Mmm...smell that?

Thats angst if i ever smelled it ...yummmy

Todd: looking very disorintated* Okayyy.. maybe tonight wasnt the best idea to get you out of bed ?..

Foxyy : O'contrar , mi amour *grins*

Todd: oh shi-

Foxyy : ummm... well be just a second ...or hundred ..*slams door *

Todd: ARGHH! GENTLY PLEASE

Lance : rolls eyes * ummm ... maybe we shoudl take a break - or seven ... bitchin' kat * grins in your *favorite way*

( neato stuff- i can not get enough of scotty nowadays- hes the sane one - lol - EMAIL ME DAMMIT !))

(( and if you get this before i do , well , im going to call you on saterday - im trying to get along writing without killing anyone in the process , and since piety's hiding out from wanda , i have a massive headache and am getting sorley tempted - fortheloveofgod,help))

-foxxy

Mmm...smell that?

Thats angst if i ever smelled it ...yummmy

Todd: looking very disorintated* Okayyy.. maybe tonight wasnt the best idea to get you out of bed ?..

Foxyy : O'contrar , mi amour *grins*

Todd: oh shi-

Foxyy : ummm... well be just a second ...or hundred ..*slams door *

Todd: ARGHH! GENTLY PLEASE

Lance : rolls eyes * ummm ... maybe we shoudl take a break - or seven ... bitchin' kat * grins in your *favorite way*

( neato stuff- i can not get enough of scotty nowadays- hes the sane one - lol - EMAIL ME DAMMIT !))

(( and if you get this before i do , well , im going to call you on saterday - im trying to get along writing without killing anyone in the process , and since piety's hiding out from wanda , i have a massive headache and am getting sorley tempted - fortheloveofgod,help))

-foxxy

sad very sad I'm going to cry now. I loved it but it sad.

As usual, ur work is always amazing, and this piece was no exception. I really loved it, it rocked muchly :)

wow...bravo...wow...