Reviews for A King for a Pawn
guest chapter 9 . 7/18
When are you updating this story, the help from a stranger and the to-love-ru crossover as they all have potential.
ninjafanhein chapter 9 . 7/2
your an asshole if you don't update
ninjafanhein chapter 9 . 7/2
please update
onewaysmart chapter 1 . 6/13
rias manipulate the situation so that she can got her hands on issei and this naruto who has been alive for god know how long just stupidly give out his identity even though devil is a being of sins? doesn't make any sense.
Yahiko 8D chapter 9 . 5/31
Update bruh please, i need this history
agnar chapter 3 . 4/21
Uh, right, so why would Naruto just drop Asia off like that, without feeding her breakfast? And then just let her go back to the church, with the crazy rapist exorcist? That makes zero sense and leaves Naruto looking like an uncaring asshole, rather completely unlike himself otherwise in this fic.
dragon slayer of death 98 chapter 1 . 2/3
hope you pair naruto with yasaka, and kuroka too. two of my favs
BasicBoi chapter 9 . 1/12
Just reading inbetween the lines, but I assume Naruto is a Campione because he killed someone from Kaguya's Clan.

The Reordering of the World thing makes a bit of sense, considering the setting. Naruto is quite possibly the oldest being in existence at this point. God, or some God's wiped away the Elemental Nations & Chakra users excluding the Yokai whom are presumably descendants of the Tailed Beasts. As to complaints people give about Naruto being OC, I don't necessarily mind it due to it making sense that his personality has changed through the eons, shame there was no mention of his original wife & children though. It could've been an interesting development to have someone stumble upon a shrine dedicated to them or something.
fluffy-fanfic-lover chapter 9 . 12/15/2019
is this dead?
Beta117 chapter 1 . 9/17/2019
This ain’t anything like naruto.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/5/2019
I agree with TeraBaapBSDK. This is just an OC with naruto's name and face. Fuck You asshole. If I still see this in the crossover tab in the next couple of weeks. It will be reported.
Marquis chapter 9 . 8/13/2019
I'm not sure if you'll ever be updating this again but just figured I'd let you know of a small mistake and offer a piece of advice that you may or may not already have been planning on doing. First off the mistake is you keep spelling the character's name as Najeda when it's actually Najenda as i'm quite familiar with her as she's the leader of night raid in Akame Ga Kill lol. As for the minor piece of advice it's just to eventually expand on Naruto's back story a little bit such as how he ended up as a campione, what did Sirzechs mean by the world being remade and then of course maybe give an idea of where the tailed beasts are
Dylan-A-Friend chapter 9 . 7/14/2019
Nice!
Archangel Uzumaki chapter 9 . 6/29/2019
Can't wait for an update been a big fan of your stories since I stumbled upon a wolf In mahora
ShadowRealmComics chapter 9 . 4/25/2019
Hmmm, Interesting story you have here. I had to read the whole thing before I could comment and I liked what I seen. Keep it up. Please continue this story when you get the chance.
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