It's been 4 years and this is still the worst cliffhanger I've ever seen in a story like what the fuck oh my god What happened to updating? what is going to become of rokuven? and also why does vanitas exist? we may never know D:

I love this story. More particularly Ven and Roxas. This kills the man

Gosh diddly I'm so conflicted

Why are you expecting hate mail and angry reviews?

Screams

Omg! A VenRoku moment! I totally loved it! I wish you would've written more though! Update soon please!

OH MAH GODDD! VANITAS YOU BUTT! please update soon please!

Cute story.

I wonder if Sora and Roxas will succeed at saving themselves. The poors boys deserve to be saved, otherwise it'll be sad. Not that I mind a story being sad, really. I highly hope they will do it.

Anyway, great job as always. Keep on the good work !

WERES THE REST?!

Frik is he gonna die Katie tell me he doesn't die khdi

Oh my

Hey I like vens family its a good combination

Wait who's vens dad a ND brother we haven't seen them yet

Reading about Sora and Roxas trying to walk was hilarious. I actually like this. I just wish you'd flesh some of the scenes out more - like show some of Kairi's thoughts on the whole thing! I'm surprised they've not asked them about why they can't walk and stuff.

I like how realistic you made this. I have a feeling you put a lot of thought into it. I could be wrong, but it seems like your trying to pair Roxas and Ventus together. If I'm wrong, sorry. If I'm not then it's a bit weird. After all they look a lot alike. I don't have a problem with two guys together, but when they happen to look exactly alike, that's when it gets weird. Besides that I like your story and, if I'm wrong from what I said before, then I have no criticism to offer. Great job!