Ohhh God damn! This story is sooo good! I enjoyed the action scenes! I find it hard to read fight scenes in literature with visuals, because it's so easy to get confused about the sense of space, and fights becoming boring to me personally when it's all about kicks and punches with tiny bits of generic swordplay. But you made my ears pound and pulse race!
I love your characterization of Tenten and Kakashi! I don't have the words presently to properly express my love for how you write everyone in this story. But when I figure it out I'll do it!

That last line got me right in the ol' ticker! It's a powerful acknowledgement of Kakashi's growing wisdom.

Excellent update, glad Ten Ten busted his ass

Nice job. For a writer, it has got to be a challenge to pair an action plot and a relationship plot together in the same story. You have kept both plots interesting and easy to follow. I also enjoyed the Kakashi as parent and mentor moments.

Oh how sad. I love it but don't all at the same time. Hope Hinata will be ok.

What a really great update very very good!

Things are falling into place for Tenten and Yamoto, him accepting the situation and her being able to get into the field, where she belongs. Excellent choice of villains! Now we greedy readers want more Kakashi/daughter moments :)

Aahh how sweet! Yamato is trying to do the right thing! I'm gushing with giddiness. And Ten watching her baby's daddy in the hospital had her thinkin to. So if Ten goes will Yamato sub for her spot as assistant? Get close to Kakashi like they were before? Maybe hear thru the grapevine how the other shinobi see Ten as a very capable and awesome ninja/woman and how they'd love to take care of her and her son since daddy's been ignoring her? Who's going to be on her team? Will Genma be there? Please update and stay in a writting mood! \(v)/

Kakashi wielded the Kubikiribocho during the fourth war after defeating Edo Zabuza and Haku. He later used it against the other resurrected Mist Swordsmen, Mangetsu included. Makes you wonder if Kakashi still has the blade, and whether or not Suigetsu has the Hatake on his list of targets! :-O

Excellent update very very good, oh Yamato is hurt

The action is heating up. Can't wait to see how badly Yamato is hurt and what happened. You are on a roll, incredibly quick updates. You are spoiling us :)

Oooohhh yeah! Nice mention about Ten being able to wield the legendary fan. Most people forget The Great Sage and Kinkaku could use it cause any NORMAL person would die from chakra exhaustion. I like how you highlighting these points subtlety. Not like she's hardcore or anything but has been very specially skilled from the get go but nobody just seemed to notice yet. And her ability to read the summoning scroll too, was funny. Anko and Kakashi were just thinking to hard. Have you though of mentioning Shiho the girl from the Cryptic Dept of Intel that likes Shika?! Maybe she could help, she's just as smart as Shika in a sence. Would really like to see Ten in action maybe in the future. Maybe Yamato could watch the baby while healing and she gets called to do a mission. It would give him time to reflect while she's away on a dangerous mission. (Dramatic music) Tun tun tuuun?! What will happen to my baby mama type of thinking. Hahaha just playing who knows right.

Mei's been assassinated!
Oh noes!

Love it! Yamato father?! Omg super! Cant wait for more!

oh poor Yamato and Tenten. I never imagined them as a couple but it is rather cute :)