This update gave me life and joy. I’m so glad they are back to friends, I’m so happy about Stoick, my heart is warmed by their emotional moment, this is brilliant. Keep it up! I love it.

You have a nice way of writing. I like how you descibe things according to whose perspective it is. That you did not describe Jack's apartment before Rapunzel saw it was a nice touch. You've done a good job with this, though there are some gramatical mistakes, I belive... English is not my first language, but there were some sentences where the structure felt off. All in all, I'm impressed by this story. Well done.

Definitely one of my favorite stories love how you write jack. Never stop writing!

Great story, just love the plot, characters, the whole thing! Could use a little more Anna and Kristoff in the future, but other than that, just wow! Looking forward to more of this amazing story!

Sorry for the super late review! I literally had to re-read the entire story since I forgot about so much that had happened but damn! What a cliffhanger! I’m so proud of Hiccup for standing up to his dad! My heart ached for Punz, she’s honestly too pure. Bless her. I love her dynamic with Jack too. I can’t wait to see where this goes! Update soon!

hello! I just found this story and I noticed that, ironically, today is the 4th year anniversary of this fanfiction! so happy anniversary!

Great update! How will Stoick respond? I can’t wait to read the next installment.

I love this new chapter! The pure emotion of Hiccup telling off Stoick finally is relief. I can't wait to see what or how you make Stoick react to Hiccup telling him off.

Yaaaasssssssssss keep them beautiful chapters rolling, but also take as long as you need cause I get it life is crazy busy.

I’m so glad you’re back! And can’t wait to see where this continues.
One point though, I don’t remember Jack having any hearing damage. Why does he need aids?

Love the characters along the story! Can't wait to see what you can make next!~

Whoa! Tinker Bell & Periwinkle are in the story?
Didn't see that coming

It's great to have you back and good to know that you're alive. I missed this story so much, now I'm wondering what stupid idea Hiccup came up with this time, I'm still mad about Merida hitting Jack she better give him a proper apology.

Can't wait to see what happens next ;]

Hey ! How've you been ? I'm just asking to know weather or not this fanfiction is abandoned or not , I hope not but at the same time your the writer so it's up to you

This is super adorable, and well written, and super amazing to read! This has to continue!

(sorry, I'm too lazy to log in at the moment)
I was just re-reading your story and am really encouraging you to continue it, it's one of my top favorites on fanfiction. 3