I'd recommend for you to label whos POV it is, since it was confusing last chapter. But its still a good book! Keep going on!

Why? NONONONONONONONONO WHHHHHHHHHYYYYYY?

U know I was loving the story but now I'm not going to finish it off because YOU KILLED AUSTIN!

Can't wait to read the sequel. Great job

Congratulations! And please update embrace soon! :)

I just realized I've never reviewed this before. It's one of my favorites. Like how they met. I'm a firm believer that real true love can change anyone, like it did Austin, they were meant to meet, meant to fall in love and even though the end was so ver sad. Though was a dream (didn't see that coming) Dallas has done issues and if was a real friend would be happy for him. I'm really glad was just a dream. Such a great story. You're a really great writer.

Them kissing no just austin and ally

I loved it! Your writing is very good (you'd be surprised how many people on here cannot write well) and your idea's are quite entertaining. Couldn't stop reading it. Can't wait to read the sequel! :D

OMG I was scared for a while there, but ur sequel is amazing so far, just like this was. Great plot line btw. Can't wait to read more of ur stories!

I'm glad u changed it. But that doesn't mean that I wasn't disappointed with the ending, it makes me sad inside, but glad. U know? I would LOVE to read a sequel. Hopefully a long one...?

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Wow...I'm truly amazed...that was so unexpected...the story was fantastic, I literally couldn't put my phone down. It was funny, cute, adorable, emotional and surprising. I loved this story and I'll definitely be reading the sequel. I actually started crying. I'm one of those weird reading dorks that put myself in the characters shoes. And when Austin died..tears actually fell from my eyes. But then I read the next chapter, and I was jumping up and down screaming "WHAT THE HECK" It was amazing, only few stories can do that to a person. You're an amazing writer and I'll definitely be reading your other stories. :)
Lol, I just read this over and I sound so old. xD

Oh my gosh, I sweat my heart stopped in Chap:29
and I was so happy when I read chapter 30
I knew he couldn't be dead, but there was the 50/50 possibility

No! Dez is his best friend. I know he wants to protect him, but they MUST stick together

So good! :)