Reviews for He Doesn't Even Notice Me
the alpha phoenix chapter 1 . 7/22/2016
I enjoyed reading this one-shot. Both TK and Kari were being rather foolish (in a good way though as far as the plot is concerned) at points in this story, such is the way of things when you're young and finding out that you're in love. TK should have just admitted his feelings to Kari on the beach instead of putting both of them through that. He better make it up to Kari lol. At least they got together at the end. Great story and well done :D
warzonecall chapter 1 . 6/1/2016
Thank you for this, I was wondering why he kept ignoring her but after his explanation it made a lot of sense.
takedigi chapter 1 . 10/28/2015
It was very exciting. I am always amazed at the love stories that have Drama. I never know what can happen.

Beautiful history. Thank you
videogamenerd101 chapter 1 . 1/21/2014
Aw, this was so sweet! I was wondering why T.K. was ignoring her, but after his explanation, it made a lot of sense. Your writing has really improved. It's detailed and it flows really well. Everyone was IC. Grammar could use some work, but that's okay. Overall, I really like this story. Good job!
Ki chapter 1 . 1/19/2014
Wow six weeks is a long time to ignore your best friend and not have any of the rest of the digidestined interfere, haha. This was a GREAT one shot, gave me so many feels. *sqwee* they're so cute
TDDoHLaL chapter 1 . 1/19/2014
I can't believe how you played with my emotions. Bravo!
It was really nice how you built up the whole storyline with all different types of emotions, from joy over astonishment up to grief and other emotions. You showed nicely how misunderstandings can change everything.
Of course I enjoyed the Takari scene at the beach. It is written in a really ingenious way. As well I can understand TK's and Kari's reactions after TK's talk with Yolei. It was just another misunderstanding, but it was nice to see how everything turned out well (of course I really like 'happy endings' in Takari stories haha). In general I enjoyed all the dialogues.
Just keep on your good writing!
Man of Faith chapter 1 . 1/19/2014
nice! had a feeling it was some thing in that sense, but I had thought TK figured things out and was trying to get his bearings together and thus, ignoring Kari. BTW: you should write a sequel with TK having a lil "chat" with Tai
shrimproll chapter 1 . 1/18/2014
I ever said that I was interested with this and I must say, I love this!
Keep writing!
outlaw2448 chapter 1 . 1/18/2014
That was all sorts of feels.

Great story as always.