Reviews for Once More
AcidESP chapter 43 . 7/15
This is a very good story, it's great, I hope you continue, greetings, see you bye!
ominous moon chapter 11 . 7/8
i HOPE naruto actually learned dealing Justus this time
Guest chapter 43 . 6/24
please update it has been three months
Guest chapter 40 . 6/24
i really hate it when people take credit and copy other people's work. he probably has no talent and lives in his mom's basement.
Guest chapter 36 . 6/24
was that a JOJO REFERENCE?! ORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORA
Guest chapter 2 . 6/17
UPDATESSSSSSSSSssssssssss
Guest chapter 43 . 6/10
And dead Story
Guest chapter 12 . 6/8
aint shukaku and kurama men?
The Ballsy Ninja chapter 43 . 6/5
I’m so happy that you are keeping up with this story and discontinuing it. Thanks for your hard work. Also on a side note; The guy copying your story? He is pathetic and don’t let people like him bring you down, I personally love it and I kind of want to be a beta reader if that’s ok. All in all this story is amazing and you keeping it up for 6 years is quite the accomplishment. Congratulations and stay safe!
PenDoTyrne chapter 11 . 5/31
Reducing Mokuton to a Bijuu ability is lazy writing... And Kurama's Bijuu ability is all about life-force, it's why his Chakra enables Naruto to enter Sage Mode quickly, almost instantly.
Hashirama gave all the Bijuu except Kurama to other villages, remember? That's how Jinchuuriki were made. That's a flaw in your theory...
Using Kurama's Chakra Mode doesn't need Naruto to be physically strong. The condition is to mix both their Chakra, with the seal removed and the user's negative emotions conquered (because that's what makes the user go berserk in cloak mode).
It's all explained when Naruto trains with Bee.
More refined theory and research would be good. This is just taking unnecessary liberty of canon facts and lazy writing.
Guest chapter 8 . 5/16
Aww, fuck! I was dying when Naruto kicked the boulder. That shit was funnY!
Guest chapter 11 . 5/13
I remember why i hate this. At the end of chapter 11 simple cause naruto is poor and broke. Kakashi made a deal to pay dango to anko from naruto account but naruto dont even have much money. Since he can't inherit his heritage of his parent money and scrolls until he is a chunin or the age of 15.
anon chapter 13 . 5/12
man i liked reading this fic for a bit but where kurama says that saikyo can’t take it because she’s a girl sound so sexist i’m sorry
ArashiNokitsune chapter 36 . 5/14
So in this fanfic universe the ninja era was made after some modern day era fell to Kaguya, am i getting that right from the Zetsu, thats messed up.
ArashiNokitsune chapter 27 . 5/13
The timeline is royaly messed up
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