Reviews for Feel, Don't Conceal
KaytieJay chapter 25 . 7/5
Reaching this part again hasn’t diminished the amount of tears that flowed from my eyes. Such a fitting tribute to the fallen. This is still one of my all time favorite works here on FF. Anytime I feel like I need to escape I fall back to this story. I can’t begin to say how much I appreciate you for writing this wonderful story. Hoping you and your family are safe from this current crisis and that all is well.
KaytieJay chapter 18 . 6/29
I’m in the process of reading this great story for the second time. I have to admit, I’m enjoying it even more than the first time. The only problem now is I’m hoping I can read through the next chapter without the flood gates opening up once again... I know I’m going to fail miserably. I already feel it in the corner of my eyes. The song is now on my Elsanna playlist and every time I hear it, a tear is shed.
AzmoorTheGreat chapter 1 . 3/31
I love this story so much. It was expertly crafted and written making everything feel real and tense. And dramatic. Every single time something happened I was on the edge of my seat worried or excited. And when something sad or depressing happened I did something VERY FEW things in life have ever gotten me to do...I cried. And at first it wasn't that bad, but at the end, I broke. This story broke me to the point where I was bawling. And I love the author and story for it. And I want more. I would love if the author would bring this back or include some way to have the story go through the events of Frozen 2. And while this story makes me want to write Elsanna, I won't. Because it will never reach the level of craftsmanship and detail that this story had. But it would be nice to see more from this universe of Frozen. I want more Erin and Elin. More Kari and Emilia. More Lise. More of each character. But most importantly, more Elsanna. I know...impossible. but I would appreciate it. And a lot of other people would too. Thank you for what you did. And you can count me as an avid follower and fan of this story for the rest of my life. Once again, thanks.
Guest chapter 10 . 2/17
Okay can I just say how much I fucking love this story? The character development is astounding, even the side characters have become some of my favorites. I love Ygrit and Iduna’s (did I spell that right?) relationship and personalities, and how loyal they are to Anna and Elsa. And a dragon? FIVE? Come on, it’s like you just wrote everything I love into one of my favorite ships fan fiction. Your writing is so eloquent too omfg, I love every second of this fic. And I’m absolutely stoked to read the fic you wrote about Anna and Elsa joining up with Clarke and Lexa from the 100. I’m going to that one immediately after I finish this one. The 100 is one of my favorite tv shows of all time, it’s one of the few other fan fictions I read regularly, and you joined them together?! Thank you, your a amazing. ️
Guest chapter 1 . 2/15
I love how you say at the end it’ll be three chapters long then I see that it’s 30 chapters right below it great so far, glad you decided to extend it
KaytieJay chapter 19 . 2/13
I couldn't stop crying at the end of this chapter, I haven't cried like that since my father died.
KaytieJay chapter 10 . 2/12
OMG! This story gripped me at the beginning... But... This chapter is one of the most riveting I've ever read in a fanfic. You have an amazing talent. I literally would die if someone could do a deviant Art of that final scene of this chapter! Please, someone do it and I'd gladly pay.!
ConlonKeith chapter 30 . 1/30
Sorry wrong message for wrong person.
ConlonKeith chapter 30 . 1/30
How about a concept for Rose Tyler aka Bad Wolf where rather than being that the Bad Wolf causing Rose Tyler to not age(eternally youthfullness) or have a extremely slow aging immortal/near immortal. It causes Rose Tyler to be a sort of interesting hybrid being between a immortal and a mortal. Where Rose Tyler has a infinite number of regenerations just with on difference those regenerations have human rate of aging with human lifespans rather than Time Lord rate of aging and Time Lord lifespans for regenerations or even near ascended alteran/ancient(stargate sg1) rate of aging and lifespan. So that Rose Tyler can travel with the Doctor for all eternity long after the Metcrisis Doctor is long dead from extreme old age and yet while visiting the various alternative time periods of extraterrestrial/exteradimensional and earth based human history. And yet not necessarily cause any confusion/jealousy/suspicion among those who they visit since she would be able to visit with a ever older looking appearance/body/face from her original appearance/body/face and and then regenerate with a entirely new appearance/body/face and the process starts all over again and yet still be able to gather and retain newer and newer memories of each and every experience as she regenerates over and over again. And the Metacrisis Doctor could try to figure out how to tweak his own DNA/TNA in order to have the same ability as Rose Tyler. That is the sort of ability that could actually theoretically derive from a mixture of based/primary human DNA with following/secondary Time Lord and TARDIS TNA. Wouldn't that actually create a more interesting possible alternate Doctor Who Storyline. Longevity Lifestyle science would only be used to lengthen the lifespan of single a human lifespan long regeneration of this new type of regeneration process. Which has many advantages when living among humans and time traveling through out the various alternative time lines of alternative human/earth history. The same could be Done for Donna Noble and Clara Oswald. I had made this suggestion because despite the thoughts of those who want to find the cure for the aging process through genetics in fact removing the aging process/biological aspect of the Second law of Thermodynamics(otherwords biological degeneration) from the human DNA is just removing one of the core attributes of what makes a human a human being besides the emotional aspect. Since for human beings the aging process is directly linked to the human growth of knowledge and wisdom through time and experience. Because even if from passage of time the outer appearance beauty may decay/wane the aging aspect may help the inner beauty to actually grow due the growth of knowledge and wisdom through time and experience. This process could be a infinite number of life time opportunities to gradually become like a finely aged wine or a finely aged version of another type of alcoholic beverage as what those who drink alcoholic beverages would describe the human aging process. This what I actually view that near immortal species who age slowly may almost miss or basically completely not aging fully immortal(eternally youthful) species could miss out on.
ZombieSlayerOfTheUnderWorld chapter 30 . 1/13
Did a bit of a nostalgia run and re-read this story, this brings me back memories of late 2014, August or September when I first discover your story and it was only 13 or 14 chapters.

Now this story is perfect, it stays with the canon or as I like to call it Canonverse and it isn't some AU or Modern, I love the old Norse religion thrown in.

Now for some constructive criticism 1) Elsa and Anna are too sex crazed, you dont write sex scenes but its mention a lot on how much they have sex, hell this is like thr 6th or 7th Elsanna story where both sisters are like rabbits in heat, this is minor thing. 2) This is also the 15th Elsanna story when the pair have children or a kid it's a daughter, it gets to the point of being cliche like where's the love for the sons? It's always a daughter when the Elsanna pair have kids, and 3) Kristoff and Olaf only appeared like in 2 or 3 chapters and their gone for the rest of the story, it would've been nice to see them in more chapters.

Moving to something else, this is highly unlikely but do you plan on making another Frozen story set during Frozen 2 or Post-Frozen 2 or like a soft reboot of Feel, Don't Conceal but set in Frozen 2?
23deecy chapter 30 . 11/26/2019
OH MY GOOOOD
HOW have i missed this masterpiece oh my goodness.
This was so funny and so creative it broke the 4th wall.
Will always read to cheer me up
23deecy chapter 29 . 11/25/2019
That ending is so perfect i am crying of happiness.
Saying bye to their children.. Erin and Elin last.. so so perfect.

Seeing Ygirt and Idunn is the best touch ever. My favorite OCs in all of forever.
Thank you so much and I know this comment is so late but hope you're having a healthy and happy life!
23deecy chapter 28 . 11/25/2019
Awww of course Erin and Elin are in love! it makes so much sense i love it

Kari and Emilia are so cute that was also genius

Thank you!
23deecy chapter 27 . 11/25/2019
Ahhh Both had powers yes this is so great!
The two cuties fighting at such a young age, so sad but had to happenAnd aww love always thaws.. good iob on that! And they each have little ice dragons huhu so cute. So loved this chapter!
23deecy chapter 26 . 11/25/2019
HUHU i so loved their thoughts during Yule.. when they made babiesI never tire of their devotion and love huhu

Pregnant at the same time..i love it! Very rare to read abt it and its so funny how you wrote their experience thank you!
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