Argh... Stupid Victor x.x

I can't belive you did this again, I'm in shock and I wanna cry :(

Are you kidding me?! X.x

No, I don't belive it :(

You really have to repeat "there is no cure" ? :( You like playing with fire girl, don't you? xD

I love this story

Argh...I really want to kill you right now, you know? xD

I already love little Eva

Pool girl, she lost her mother in such young age :(
I lost my mom too and I know how hard it is :(

My favourire ship and Bon Jovi... I love ya girl

You are amazing.. Geez, those emotions *.*

Maybe I'll learn little Spanish during read this because of you xD

I just love Leo

OMG, what just happend?! :O

I'm so excited right now! *.*

The first 10 chapters of this story were well written, well developed and just intense enough. The story gets a bit much with all the plot developments/character introductions/newly interacting universes. Im not entirely sure why you did it tbh. Seems like an awful amount of time to overcomplicate a well written story. Till this point its 10 very nices/10.

I reckon Victor could probably distract the volcano by jumping into it. I really like how well integrated the spanish is. Not forced at all. Kinda irritating how the translate unction messes up the english as well as the spanish so I gotta keep switching back and forth. 9/10

I hope Victor gets stabbed by a volcano. The quicker the better.

That is the greatest haiku I've ever read. My respect for you and this story has dramatically increased. 10 very nices outta 10. (There were other reasons but this is the main one)

Liked the prophecy fam. I feel like you could prolly lay that down in a rap. Can Rachel rap a prophecy? 9/10 Im not sure how I feel about the whole Caleo (muh otp :c) scenario but this is excellently written.