Damn he's BRUTAL i love that

That was brutal, just verbally tore her a new asshole. hahaha

This is interesting keep it going

Update rn

Hey asshole. Love the amount of edge here. You like Sasuke, faggot?

Then you'll love the fact that your cunt of a mother was slurping up shit like a scum sucking piece of garbage. The fucking whore couldn't get enough. Do her a favor, stick a gun up your ass and shoot yourself. The bitch hopes to birth something more respectable than whatever the fuck you turned out to be.

Absolutely incredible story so far! I really hope that you continue it at some point!

I guess the writing is okay... i guess? That said, I'm not so sure why there are so many people hyped on this story when the first two chapters are confusing as hell... How do you fall out of a tree positioned on basically a cliff of the Hokage monument... Bypass the villages and end up in a tunnel? With no sign of what happened to those villages

THEN for some reason you invent a reincarnation just for Madara when all that was truly needed was the Chakra fed genjutsu for the Madara imprint... That said... How in the fuck do you reincarnate someone from an imprint of their Chakra? 1 and a half star out of 5. Sheesh!

Duck butts are not beautiful. Ditto for people whose hair are shaped as such.

While rape is a horrendous crime, I have much less reservations about the crime committed on rapists themselves.

I hope you will change Naruto's relationship status from monogamous to polygamous. I want to see at least Mikoto, Kurenai, and Anko added to the collective as well.

Your story is...okay and has potential but when you have Naruto acting like danzo that ruined it for me. Sorry.

NOICE!

This is entertaining... lolz love the Gilgamesh cameo and Hinata’s geekiness

That was particularly cold blooded

Fuck off this was awesome till the fucking gilgaturd guy appeared!

Final Fantesy. Nice.

WHEN ARE YOU UPDATING THE STORY?
LOVE YOUR STORY
ARE YOU GONNA CONTINUE OR NOT