Reviews for In Your Head |
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Guest chapter 4 . 11/13/2014 Please write more |
Atsirk Enoh chapter 4 . 8/15/2014 Hah hah she was interrupted. |
Trisha22 chapter 4 . 7/27/2014 Loved this! Update soon |
bodsquad chapter 4 . 7/27/2014 Hahaha, ooops, kinda buggered up there didn't she, oh well. Great chapter. |
chaosrin chapter 4 . 7/26/2014 Hmm I wonder if there a way to clearly show her mind injection into other people's body in your writing since you might have a problem if the details get mix up also explain the terms of how much control in her mind injection since this chapter more Astral projection with links to body sense, it fine now but. Well anyway do update more. |
chaosrin chapter 3 . 5/30/2014 Hope you can show off Pansy's street smart |
monkgirl chapter 3 . 5/20/2014 Welcome back! Love this story. Thanks for the update. Hope you stick around. I think this pairing is hot! |
bodsquad chapter 3 . 5/20/2014 Hahaha can't wait for the fun to begin. |
chaosrin chapter 2 . 3/4/2014 Like Hermione's analysis of Ron's sex attempt. You know Pansy can still lie plus Hermione need to find evidence just because Pansy mind control her and being the only one in the room...well do create a strong Pansy should Hermione force the truth out of her and the aftermath. She's a Slytherin just because she have this mental problem and consider an outcast there's still strength in her due to her surviving pure blood status fight in Slytherin and their society and Voldemort shadpw back then. Never like it when a strong character start sobbing and being all vulnerable in order to advance the romance/pity relationship with their good side opposites. Its out of character. |
ashtraygirl0013 chapter 2 . 2/1/2014 Wow... Hermione will surely be pissed and feel used if she figures it out... she just told Pansy she wished to help her... maybe become friends someday? And then mind invasion and control... ouch! How will Pansy explain herself? |
monkgirl chapter 2 . 1/31/2014 Love this story. I'm very impressed with your writing and story-telling skills. Please continue! Thanks for the update. |
bodsquad chapter 2 . 1/30/2014 Hmmm i think she's getting kind of obsessed now haha. Great chapter well done. |
monkgirl chapter 1 . 1/30/2014 Interesting! Can't wait to see how this comes along. Very good writing style. |
storys217ph chapter 1 . 1/26/2014 Interesting start, I like the part with absent minded movements, I can imagine it in a cinematic sort of way. And I like that name, Casimiro Dominicus, very cool. |
chaosrin chapter 1 . 1/26/2014 Curious, did she use legilimency in the war? An asset like that would not go unnoticed...from the looks of it Dumbledore would have got to her first if she feel so light heart, I mean voldy would put Pansy to use in a brutal manner hence guilt and posttraumatic stress disorder so perhaps as light side's secret interrogator? How else the Order can successfully evade the order. Can't wait to see the relationship begins plus her mannerism is spot on just need more dialogues. Do update |