Reading this was beautiful, I have read it many times and even so it never ceases to amaze me and make me imagine the stage behind each fragment.
You are wonderful!
Thanks

Great fic! Absolutely in character and a really good description of how they are close and at the same time not really. Love everything about it! Well done!

Very interesting read. I rather liked it but it is really depressing. Good job!

I always quote a few lines in fanfics when I review but if I quote my favorites for this one shot I'll will be quoting the whole chapter. I couldn't even choose. This was... OH MY FUKIN GOODNESS. THIS WAS JUST BRILLIANCE. SUCH A MASTERPIECE YOU HAVE HERE. WOW.

SO POETIC. JUST SO BEAUTIFUL AND PAINFULLY BEAUTIFUL. The way you manage to tell the story and their feelings in such short words just SPLENDID.

I seriously hope that you wrote more for the Helsa/Hansla famdom. If you haven't PLEASE WE NEED MORE OF YOUR BRILLIANCE. I would most definitely read more of your work.

Such an amazing work ! loves

This is AWESOME!

I'm sorry.

No. Just ... just, no.

Hans does not get to win. He does not deserve anything beyond dying in a hole. On fire.

This was wonderfully dark, I'd love to see more Helsa fics from you. :)

I totally liked this one, can't even put it in words

I always really like these types of fics and I think you did a great job with this one! Keep up the lovely work!

Gorgeous work! Very poignant and I loved it! Terrific job! )

...wow... I don't think I've seen anything like this ever before... Just... Wow...

(I mean this in the best possible way)

This is amazing! You captured Hans and Elsa perfectly, and I will re-read them all the time. My favorites are hurricane, cold, red, cover, talent, fever, fire, body and unknown. Beautiful job!

THIS IS ABSOULTE GOLD 333 AMAZING

I feel like I just read clips of 50 different stories. Unfortunately/fortunately, depending on your pov, I want to read the full version of all of them. It was a little ruff to read through the whole thing though. I got to tell you it took me a few tries.