Aggggg If Buzz is dead ahhhhh

Like I said I love this fic, but I also love Gus and if he is a villan I will scream

Dont worry ha I was depressed about psych ending too but they keep making movies so that's good I feel you on the obsessive geek thing also this fic is a masterpiece

I can’t wait for the sequel

Do you plan on doing a sequel still?

Please right more of this it is the best story I have ever seen and that is true thank you for posting this

Who is Shaun’s whife

You have talent but you rush and makes mistakes like putting ' where they shouldn't be. The story is rushed, Declan and Jules breaking up was so rushed that Jules seemed trampy and there was DJ who she suddenly didn't care about. Gus might as well have not been in here at all. Shaun and Gus' friendship is an integral part of the show whether you like it or not. How can Shaun trust that Juliet wouldn't disregard Zuri like she did DJ? Shaun's medical distress didn't get resolved and what was the point of having Henry call Shaun about Jack? Jack wasn't even in the story much! All of this was more annoying because you have talent but don't use it. Each chapter is disconnected, no continuity at all. One minute you have Dobson a suspect, then nothing. There is no clear idea why Gus is questioned. You need to focus. I don't know why you post before you think about what your synopsis detailed. Gus and Shaun's friendship rebuilding could have added heart but you left him out and your characters were one dimensional with no feeling. Sad because I think you could have had something with this plot.

Nice twist, but you might want to do some research about things that go wrong in international adoptions, and issues faced by children who are international adoptees before proceeding with the storyline.

Show what her poor parents in Uganda went through, categorize them as humans who lost a child and portray them as sympathetic. The child is now seven years old, it is a bit too late to have her just be shipped back and live with her biological parents as if nothing had happened. What kind of people are her bio parents? What would be their experience moving to the US?

I like how you wrote this story and I look forward to reading the sequel.

Yay! I'm so psyched you are continuing this!

I'm really glad you're going with a sequel. I loved this whole story.

What a great start to my weekend and what a horribly wonderful twist for poor Zuri. I have enjoyed every moment of this story and I loved the flashbacks in this chapter from both points of view. I wonder if he'll ever tell her the truth? Anyway, I look forward to reading your sequel and thanks so much for sharing and completing this story. Keep up the great writing!

Yay! PM me when you post the new one? I don't go on much anymore, but you are helping me get through a tough breakup

Kudos on a great story. It is great Shawn recovered.