Reviews for Beyond the Veil What If
westwardsailor chapter 1 . 3/11/2015
wish that you would continue this. would have to read
swag2011 chapter 1 . 4/13/2014
I really like the idea for this story and if you decided to go further with it I would have to read it.
magitech chapter 1 . 1/29/2014
Nice start and you show Emma is far more intelligent and adaptable when she offers Harry a choice and promised to abide by his decision rather than the other two options which were near demands.

Plus her devastatingly sexy beauty sure doesn't hurt :)
Sean Malloy-1 chapter 1 . 1/26/2014
Interesting. you call this "option C" what happened to "option B"?
The God Of War Kratos chapter 1 . 1/26/2014
loving it so far
bluedevil26 chapter 1 . 1/26/2014
That sure would have changed things from the original fic but i like it.(got to have the x girls though)
ramasioti100 chapter 1 . 1/26/2014
Good story. This can become into a full story. Harry already with twenty girls by the second chapter would be interesting.
WhiteElfElder chapter 1 . 1/26/2014
This should be interesting, especially if this is not the beaten-down Harry and is instead one with a backbone and a distaste for those that try to manipulate or control him.
BruddaJokka chapter 1 . 1/26/2014
Oh very nice. Hope this one gets developed a bit more actually.
dragonmanic chapter 1 . 1/26/2014
Awesome start and I probably would have loved reading the story if it took this turn. I also like how you added a bit more urgency to the situation than what seemed to happen in the original story. Since it seem like both the army and shield were just pussyfooting around waiting for things to finish
edboy4926 chapter 1 . 1/26/2014
Great intro
You know, it would be interesting to see this story bear fruit, since almost all the HP/X-men stories I found Harry always joins the X-men and only one where he joins Magneto (though in that one Magneto was his grandfather)