Well. Please excuse me while I go cry myself to sleep. This is beautiful. Super dark, and for a minute in that last chapter I just about thought you were going to kill a baby and had a minor panic attack. But man, is this good. I realize it's been a very long while since you've updated and believe me I get how that goes but ya know, if you ever wanna update again, I'm so there!

This is one of the most promising fanfics I've read. Since it's been almost a year since your last update I don't know if you'll continue this or not but I certainly hope you will. The characterizations are great and leave us wanting more, more, more. I was conflicted about reading this because it has been so long since you've updated and I've read too many fanfics that were abandoned. After reading a few of your reviews I decided to read it anyway even knowing I would probably feel disappointed when I reached the unfinished ending.I so enjoyed what you did write that I'm glad I read it. We can't know what an author is going through in real life and why you can't return to your story. I hope if anything negative is going on in your life it will turn to positive soon. I will bookmark this in the hopes of coming back to it one day to find you've come back to finish it. Thank you for sharing your idea with us.

this is really good and really sad. please update soon.

whoa, intense, and very compelling. I really would like to see what happens next! :)

I was reading your 100 story and decided I liked your writing style so I went to check out your other stories. This was my very first Star Trek fanfic and I think you got me hooked! This story so far has been fantastic and it's one of the best stories I have read in a while. Thank you for giving this to the world haha!

Pretty please update! I Love this story and the frooliins, especially Ruhn 3

Pretty please update! O love this story and the frooliins, especially Ruhn 3

Quite the best multi-chapter story going on in the fandom right now. I read the whole 10 chapters in a night, I couldn't put my phone down. Now I'm sleep-deprived. So you better update soon! :)

YESSSSSS a new chapter! Thanks! Jim's pain hurts me. Seriously. This fandom needs help.

Lord, I thought this story was abandoned! Glad to see its not, though. I really liked the chapter.

Absolutely love your story! I've read stories that delve into the trauma of Tarus IV and its effects on Jim but this is definitely one of the best ones I've read. I'm really interested in seeing where you plan on taking this. Looking forward to your next update!

so every now and then, I peruse the Star Trek fanfiction to find any ongoing works that are really . Me. Tell. You. This is absolutely fantastic! You manage to blend together all of Jim's traumas into one excellent and heartrending story. I loved every second of this and all the beautiful characters. WOW! I really can't describe how amazing this is and it's a crime you're not getting more reviews!
I really can't wait to see what comes next, though my heart is broken from all the innocents who died.

I loves this story, fantastic descriptive format especially when describing your made up race.
I could picture it all in my head perfectly, I also felt the desperation to find little Jamie after the village was bombed!
I couldn't put the 9 chapters down, I hope you continue it!

I like this chapter. It was very well-written.

I'm new to this story but I want to say, you have me on the edge of my seat, and I want to know what happens next. So please update ASAP and I would like to see Jim re-unit with little Jamie his alien daughter he faught so hard to protect. Somehow I want him to be a father, someone who he could love like the rest of the crew who cares for him.