I love it!
However, please don't stop here! Write a sequel! Please please!
I'm begging you!

Woah! Nice job! Brilliant writing! I loved it!

Oh holyy hannah! what did i ever do to you?! WHY do you have to go and rip out my heart, jump on it, and feed it to a Rhiannon?! But seriously i think i need medical attention that part with Natasha just, well lets just say my heart is no longer functioning correctly. But you know other than the demolished heart, good job with your writing.

UGGG can't we get a second chapter when Skye learns he isn't really dead because this is so not okay

Oh my gosh! I freaking love it! MORE MORE MORE!

PLEASE continue with this!

Star

Oh god...this really is making me so damn sad. I am crying! Why? I don't know. It's just..sad that Tasha tells her he died and then...she finds out he hasn't and never told her about it. That's so mean and nasty. Really...he could've let her know. She loved him. And he loved her. They were father and daughter! Why would he just forget about her and never tell her he did in fact survive?!
Okay, enough with that. Great writing, awesome story. That last sentence broke my heart. ... She is Skye Coulson. She has a last name of gods sake! Haha, sorry. I'm just getting all wrapped up in stories I really like. You did a great job here! :)
Maybe (and I'm begging you on my knees) you could write a sequel? Happy Ending after all?

All the best. :)

I love this plot! Please keep writing on this.

I really like your story - please write another chapter!

OK I agree with awesomeperson12,. you have to do another one...her idea was good too

please make a sequal to this it was really really good

Please continue this story with a sequal or something it was really good

Um, no. You gotta do another chapter to this! Maybe how she's with Miles, and the team Coulson is on (the bus team) is mad at him for finding out government secrets and goes to talk with him, and when they knock on the door they are met with Skye?

Yeah, thats just an idea. JUST DO ANOTHER CHAPTER please!

This is an interesting idea! I like it.

Just one thing though, when you are doing time jumps maybe put in a line break or something that alerts the reader that that is what is happening so we aren't confused for the first part of the sentence and it goes smoother.

Other than that, I enjoyed this first chapter and I'm looking forward to more!

I love your fanfiction. I love it so much. Please keep writing.