Reviews for Innocence's journey
Guest chapter 50 . 5/17
I have read the Arthur story first since I am researching arthur fanfiction.
However this is my favorite couple and I enjoyed this fanfiction so much! Are you really working on a sequal? Can you perhaps give a hint of how far along you are? I hope that you keep writing. I really like frances and your writing style!. She is such a realistic character. Thank you so much for sharing this with us!
Lil'Sparrow7 chapter 50 . 5/1
This was an excellent story and I’m excited for the sequel!
Guest chapter 29 . 12/16/2019
I recently found this story and i am completely enraptured. your character development and storyline enrichment from the original is so amazing. I haven't written a review because it's so damn good. I love love love this. Please keep this up.
leelee202 chapter 49 . 8/23/2019
Fitting end to the story. I was surprised though, that she changed her name, but reading Arwen's explanation, it makes perfect sense.
It's good to see that they are so happy as a couple, and will soon rebuild Ithilien and even start a family. I was kinda hoping to see Thrandy...I guess I'll have to wait for the sequel ;)
Great chapter. Well done.
leelee202 chapter 48 . 8/23/2019
Beautiful chapter, hinting at a close and tying everything up. I am eagerly waiting to see Thranduil's scene - I do hope he is accepting of the two lovebirds. I'm glad she'll get to see Arwen and Aragorn and the twins on a regular basis - they have become the family she left behind.
Great chapter. Well done.
leelee202 chapter 47 . 8/20/2019
The last part was heartbreaking. To give up your world and family and everything you know to be with the one you love is hard. Painfully hard. There was no easy way, not for either Frances or her clone. Both would lose something dear and important to them.
Beautiful chapter. Well done.
leelee202 chapter 46 . 8/20/2019
Oh this was beautiful. It was wonderful reading them finally being together as a couple and enjoying a 'honeymoon'. I especially loved the line in the beginning where it says: Being loved by an elf could have no equivalent. It fittingly describes how deeply elves love and feel.
I am glad to see that Legolas has accepted her 'clone' - she is exactly Frances, so I'm not surprised. I do wonder, though, that when they finally bond, will it somehow give Frances immortality?
Great chapter. Well done.
leelee202 chapter 45 . 8/7/2019
This was such a bittersweet reunion. Beautiful that they are finally together, but heartbreaking that the other Frances has to carry on, alone. Maybe she will find the will to continue now that the bond she and Legolas had is gone, and her heartache is not so unbearable. But still...my heart. You really enjoy toying with my feelings, don't you? lol.
leelee202 chapter 44 . 8/7/2019
A clone! But that means the real Frances is still back on Earth and suffering...oh my. And now it seems that she is too late. I do wonder how Loki was able to send her clone to ME. Maybe another clone of Frances can stay with Loki - he's YUMMY! lol. Oh please let Legolas see her in time.
leelee202 chapter 43 . 8/7/2019
Ah your last comments on this chapter was bittersweet - 3 years she has been searching to no avail. But now the stone is glowing! Does that mean we get the reunion? I hope so...
leelee202 chapter 42 . 8/7/2019
I have a feeling that France's and Legolas' reunion is going be some time in the future and not as soon as she is hoping for. But hopefully with Mulder on the case she will find the answer soon enough. Poor Legolas, though, having to accept his fate. And those visions that Frances is having does not bode well.
leelee202 chapter 41 . 8/7/2019
Oh please please please let her get to him. That vision was jarring, to say the least. And Gandalf was right - Legolas would never survive in our world. I really can't wait to see how they are reunited.
leelee202 chapter 40 . 8/7/2019
This was such a heartwrenching chapter. Poor Frances. Poor Legolas. I could feel her heartache and fury, and the unjustness of the whole situation. I hope she can find a way back.
leelee202 chapter 39 . 8/7/2019
Well if that was a omens of what is to come, I don't know what is. Poor Legolas. I do hope there is a way for her to return to him.
leelee202 chapter 38 . 8/7/2019
It was great having a lighthearted ending to this chapter. They certainly need it, knowing what is to come, and the battle they have yet to fight. But how long must I wait until they complete the bond? Slow burn is killing me here...
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