Like the concept of the story. But for some reason I was irritares by the madara angle. Poor Hashirama, Guy like him doesnt deserve that. Also it was irritating how many times the question of her lover was mentiones but in a tone like that is no big issue. Personally I would love to see some mito bashing.

this whole thing is such a drag to read I keep going to see if it picks up later on but I'm starting to lose faith that it will. that's just too bad because it has a lot of potential but the writer doesn't seem capable of doing it justice. I really hope the changes because once again the concept has a massive amount of potential

Jesus Christ... You know, if you have to put the English translation in brackets just so people have an idea what the hell you're talking about, that's probably a good sign that you should just write it in English in the first place. You're writing an English language story here. There is absolutely no reason for you to write stuff like "demon of the mist" in Japanese.

As of right now, this is a chore to read and I quit after the first few paragraphs.

Reading only this "Sadly, this profile is officially abandoned. Thanks to everyone who provided support as I grew as an author." when some notes say we should read the profile page makes me sad. (Should've just repeated the thing a few times before and after the original things that were on your profile.)

Where else are you writing?

good idea here. your constant flashback hinder your story telling. back and forth kills the flow, and gets confusing to figure out whats going on.

Wtf is that last piece? I'm confoozd.
Interesting character development. I never gathered if Sasuke knows Naruto has the Mangekyo. That'd be an interesting conversation to see.
But I'm guessing the fic will never be updated again. A shame. It was good while it lasted, and I do not regret clicking on it.
...but have you considered the amazing blackmail amongst all the pain, sorrow and mental issues of memory integration?

god i hate that dumb bitch hinata she remind me of a moldy bloody tampon just hope she don't end up with naruto hate that stuiped pairing

If Minato had senju and Uchiha parents he should have awakened the rinnegan

Weak naruto

Everything was alright until you bring that shit called "CRA" That's a bullshit and you know it.
even if this story is old and most likely dead, it's still a bullshit, in fact that's even worse than a Fem!Kyubii and let me tell you that that shit is another big bullshit... So hell naw fuck yo.

(Even if it is not a Harem it's still a bullshit)

well i agree a bit about the hinata thing, but she never loves him, even i the current anime/manga and the boruto crap kishimoto calls a show

she had a form of heroes worship
she even let this bleed into her own child, boruto
oh well though

Interesting fic

that was good keep the chapters coming

So is this story actually dead or what.

NaruIno Kreygasm.