Reviews for Falling |
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Plume-now chapter 1 . 6/13/2015 Oh, you see these ashes over there ? It used to be my heart. Your fanfiction is evil and LawLu is horrible but I will read it again and again a hundred of time. Thank you for that feels I didn't need and that sadness and that love and grbufhrofrtrb *dying* I need others. Continue like this! Plume-now |
daydreamfox chapter 5 . 6/3/2015 Damn the birdcage is a year old! The Shanks reference was adorable, never actually put the two pieces together until now and well, I'm just so happy for my otp even more! Kick Doffy's butt Luffy! Protect your man! |
Paulie MickeyJ chapter 5 . 5/31/2015 Oh One Armed lover! Who reminded Luffy of Shanks! Another reason for Shipping LawXLuffy pairing. Wow... you know where to put the thoughts... keep it up |
roo17 chapter 4 . 3/22/2015 Oh please please update this! I absolutely love it! And I'm most curious to see how you would write what happened in the current chapter. But Law just confessing and then them coming out by simply holding hands was just ADORABLE. They must have been so damn happy! :D But nooo, Doffy had to go and ruin it all by shooting Law in his (perfect) abs! Anyway, can't wait for an update, if you're going to continue this! :D |
yuffy chapter 4 . 9/6/2014 wow |
Puroppu chapter 4 . 5/22/2014 Nice fic. I like this. Please, keep going like this :) |
general yumi chapter 4 . 5/22/2014 I read the reviews before reviewing myself and I can't help but wonder where it says this is over? Anyways really LOVE it! This is super amazing! Great Job! |
Paulie MickeyJ chapter 1 . 5/8/2014 sad... I want happy ending... But it was sweet.. |
Vivianne95 chapter 3 . 4/15/2014 Aw, you can't end it like that, there's no end... So frustrating! I hope you will update a sequel to it! |
xXxxxxx chapter 3 . 4/9/2014 Aawwww so cute! Nice work author-san! |
South Boy chapter 3 . 2/10/2014 Oooooh sunnnnnnnnny! I only just saw that you updated this! This was soooo fucking good! You had me jumping up and down on my chair out of excitement! *-* Oh dear mother of god... Tests are seriously the worst... Good luck with em and I hope you don't fail any! :) |
general yumi chapter 3 . 2/9/2014 Thank you for updating! The way you made this chapter finish made me feel like your starting a story where the Straw Hat Pirates save law. Of course with lawlu thrown in there. |
general yumi chapter 2 . 2/8/2014 Thank You for adding another chapter! I hope you make another chapter where it could be in third person point of view and it shows what happens to law and luffy. LOVE the story! |
South Boy chapter 2 . 2/8/2014 T-T those feels! You totally made me fall in love with this, by how you described luffys feelings! :3 But you know, sunny, the way you ended it totally made it sound like this was going to be turned into a story... |
general yumi chapter 1 . 2/4/2014 I LOVE the way you described Law's love for Luffy. I believe you should add another chapter in Luffy's point of view. |