Reviews for Barrel Rider |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I'm confused. You can't really just wait for a broken rib that's punctured a lung to heal. For one, if you punctured a lung and went without medical treatment(meaning, surgery at the very least. Not only to correct the broken ribs, but to sew the wound in the lung shut) you would die. Most likely by either internal bleeding or if that doesn't kill you first, and you're getting a steady stream of blood in your lungs you'll drown in your own blood. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Are you okay with making more chapters? This is really good, but I don't want to push you if you don't want to continue. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So sweet omg :') |
![]() ![]() People who want this continued say aye! Dwalin: aye Gloin: aye lads Fili & Kili : aye! Nori: yes! Several other dwarves who names rhyme: Aye! Bilbo: No I- *falls unconscious* Majority vote says continue! Pleeeeaaaase! D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very sweet and warm and fuzzy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this! One problem tho, if Bilbo had punctured a lung, it wouldn't just heal and get better. It would kill him without modern day medicine. Sorry, just needed to say that.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love love love. Please continue |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Bilbo! What a rough ride. |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww thiis was so sweet! and it would wasting of writing skills if you don't continue this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fantastic! Really enjoyed this little glimpse into concerned Thorin. I would love to read more of this and see how everyone deals with Bilbo's injuries as he heals. Will they make it to the mountain, or be forced to leave Bilbo behind? With they stay with him as he heals, perhaps he gets worse before he gets better? What about their time in Lake Town? It would be interesting to see where this story could go. Many thanks for writing this lovely one shot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is a lovely beginning! Would love to see more :) |