Reviews for Ultimate Fairy
Guest chapter 44 . 7/24
Once again I want to apologize for my comments where I voiced my annoyance of Ben's loss to Jose. I believe I'm overestimating Ben's abilities and just ignoring Jose's own despite him being a Wizard Saint. If the Omnitrix did't time out, maybe Ben could've won.
I also asked if Ben could absorb the ethernano in the air and learn magic, I want to retract that question as I realized he can't as he doesn't he the organ in his body like the people of Earthland.
Also in the situations where Ben was about to be killed by Laxus and Jose, does his Omnitrix have that life saving function to turn Ben into the proper alien for that situation. In the off chance Gajeel or Makarov didn't make it in time?
B-Rad-12 chapter 44 . 7/25
I'd like to make a prediction. Maybe Ultimate10 is releasing the next chapter on July 30-31, the date which the Fairy Tail vid game will be released in game stores. Just guessing.
Guest chapter 44 . 7/22
Can you re-upload your Ben 10 fanfic? The new author is taking too long to upload the new version of the story.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/22
Hello, Ultiamte10! I hope things are going well for you. Your story is really awesome to read especially with Ben interacting with characters in the Fairy Tale universe. There is one thing I would like to ask though. Could you repost your old "Ben 10: Prime Force" since the new author is taking a long time to post the story you created a while back. I'm not complaining about the new version of the story though I like some changes that were made in the new one (particularity Megatron controlling Ben's mind). I know it's owned by the new author ,but it would be really great if you would repost it for old times sake. In fact one of your favorite authors had their original story up even though it is being adopted by someone else. It would mean a lot (as well as others if you look in the review section of the new version) if the old version is back up. Still I hope you are doing alright and I can't wait for the next chapter in this story!
Guest chapter 44 . 7/22
I just want to apologize for blowing up about Ben being nerfed and losing to guys like Jose and Laxus. Its just a repetitive thing when reading this story when Ben faces strong opponents. I can handle the Natsu and gray saving Ben from Deliora on Galuna since that was never a fight. I was more mad about the Jose fight since Ben's fought guys tougher than Jose and the watch timed out and nearly killed him. Then in the fight against Laxus he was in the perfect form to beat him, but then the watch times out again leaving him defensless and nearly killed again. Its just become repetitive while making the big fights go back to the main plot with someone having to wrap it up and save Ben's life. I'm glad Ben beat Jellal and Evergreen, but if Ethernano is in the air shouldnt Ben be absorbing it? I mean in Generator Rex he temporarly absorbed Nanites, so this shouldnt be different. Wouldnt that mean Ben could learn magic, at least something to defend himself in his human form? I dont know, i've just been to into this story and getting mad for no reason.
Jorge Sparda chapter 37 . 7/24
did he use his Lightning Fire Dragon Mode against Laxus? how?
Guest chapter 35 . 7/22
Ha! Everegreen being the one to defeat Ben Tennyson!? Too late! Ben already lost to Aggregor, Diagon and Jose. These guys can kick not only Ben's butt, but also Vilgax, Gwen and Kevin.
Guest chapter 23 . 7/17
Ya'know i read the Entrapment arc like 4 times and it's really nice that's a very impresive story arc but sometimes i think that you should have added Juvia too. You know,getbsee Juvia's reaction learning Ben's origins and stuff,just a thought.
Shrouded Absol chapter 44 . 7/18
So I'm confused on how Elfman wants to take-over Ben's aliens. I know he wants to get stronger, but Take-over magic involve absorbing the victim like what Mirajane did to that demon or Elfman to the Beast? Wouldn't that remove the alien from the Omnitrix, just curious.
Also you mentioned Hex a while back and I'm curious if he'll have a part in this story. I know this story doesn't follow Omniverse, but I'm also wondering if you'd have Hex reformed like in the show. And what was he doing in Earthland? Was he searching for a way to defeat Adwaita or trying to find a way to revive his brother Spellbinder? Keep up the great work, can't wait to read more.
Guest chapter 37 . 7/10
I'm very sick and tired of Ben being nerfed like this because of the Omnitrix. He could've beaten Laxus and Jose, but he runs out of time and is nearly killed in the end. Can't fix that! Or at least make Ben useful in his human form! I'm sorry, I'm just sick and tired of his watch nearly getting him killed in the end because it ran out of time. Please say you have some kind of plan in the future for this problem.
johanhaniff28 chapter 44 . 7/9
When are you going to update chapter 45? I’m so excited!
Actionmoviefan chapter 44 . 7/7
I hope you're ok and this story resumes
Guest chapter 1 . 7/2
Yo nice chapter but are you going to have Ben say he is sorry for his actions
Omniverse of fiction chapter 44 . 7/3
love your story but theres 2 main things I dislike 1. unless this is going to be explained later that Ben Tens universes magic has no corilation to the Fairy Tale universes magic (which the sacraficial portal spell hex used seems to disprove) Ben has magic he just doesnt decide to learn it and 2. while I love 'serious Ben' I dislike that he used Fasttrack in that situation as I feel that Ben would use XLR8 as he is cannonicly faster and also he has used him for longer and therefore would be much more proficent with him
Arjun Yadav chapter 44 . 6/29
Also plssssssss include Alien X. It's a humble request. I just want to see how the Ultimate Team would react to and omnipotent being. He could whip anyone's ass.
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