Did someone tell you to stop updating? I do not recall doing so.

Yaaay! Can’t wait for the next chapter!

Loving it so far! I like that Lelouch's mind is actually helping his physical abilities now that he is in a VR. At first, I thought that since there were guilds he would make the Black Knights and do BK stuff. His goals against LC was very like him. I kinda feel weird on Lelouch's game name though. But everything else was great. Can't wait to see the next update. The cliffhanger is killin' me. Hope you well, best wishes!

I liked the chapter!1

More please

Great fic. I love how you crafted Lelouch's character, but I think Lelouch would have probably started the Black Knights again around the 9 month or so. Please update this story, and let Lelouch create the Black Knights please!

Great chapter!

Still don't know what Black Iron Palace is.

It was taking down LC in that terrible raid that gave Kirito the knowledge & experience he needed to survive the conclusion in that Gun Gal Online game later.
So whats to be done about that?
'Course if those serial killers all die it wont be a problem.

Whats this "Black Iron Palace"? Don't go springing this on people without previously explaining.
Is it a hideout where Lelouch can torture out information of that man?

Read up to here, stopping. Its so dreadfully dull

Great story! I love it! Well done! I am dying to know what happens next! :)

Please update again!

The idea of Lelouch in SAO is good, but your fiction is the same as canon, rendering it somewhat useless.

All players that died in canon died in your fiction. All big and small incidents played out the same in the end. The only difference being that an extra character is there.

I still don't know why Diabel refused the health potion. He was a beta tester and greedy; but a good leader and overall a nice guy. They should have forced the potion down his throad.

The ending was definitely cringey. I would have wanted something like the plot of tokyo ghoul remnant, where Kaneki's mind replaces Haise's, supposedly, and Haise just happens to also be a ghoul. I wanted Lelouch to be born into Kirito's body. That way, we wouldn't have any Mary Sue bullshit for Kirito. But at least Kirito is no longer the protagonist. You wrote Lelouch well enough, but I enjoy sadistic characters more. Lelouch from the show would have no problem killing people to accomplish his goal. Laughing together is cringey. The beater thing is cringey. Its cringey to think of lelouch giving kirito a pep talk before his martyr side kicking in. Also, I would have preferred if Lelouch wasn't super strong, as Lelouch was a leader, not a fighter. Asuna is good. Grammer is good. Story length is ok. You do crossovers very well. pssssssst. I really hate the beater scene. Probably cringey enough for me to stop reading. I'll try to forget that scene and continue reading.

I like this more than I thought I would, keep going