Great story they both deserve happiness and things to go right for them. I'm off to check out your other stories.

Excellent! And surprisingly, Leonard taught us a very valuable life lesson.
Evil Joker grin...
Always read it before you sign it.

Oh well, his hindsight is Penny and Sheldon's key to freedom!

I really liked the whole story. I don't like the show, I like the Penny/Sheldon fanfic, read all I can, you do such a great job. Anyone who objects to this pairing should go else ware.

Interesting to read a Shenny story where Penny hit it big.

it was a little hard to keep track of who was saying what.

Great story! I love Shenny!

Great story really enjoyed reading it

I was wondering if and when Nora would turn up in this story Great chapter

Placing this review here because it's the second story i'm reading from you (and i plan on raiding your profile after), but as it applies more to your writing style than anything else i thought it would be a good place as any.

In short, while i like most of your ideas-even if you're sometimes a little melodramatic with their execution- the way your stories are mostly made up of only dialogue kind of grates on the reader after a while, especially since, withouth any kind of description regarding the setting, you end up using the name of the person the speaker's referring to every other sentence, which is another point that can very quickly become annoying.

I'm not any kind of expert, so no idea regarding proper proportions or such, but normally when reading prose one should have at the very least some kind of setting description between lines of dialogue; rading your fics feels a bit like reading a comic, only with no figures to understand exactly what's going on or how the characters react, and so half the time your characters feel flat, emotionless.

Please note that i'm not trying to knock you down or complain just because-as i said, i really like most of your ideas and the way you develop the plot. I started watching TBBT only recently, and liked it a lot less after s3 and seeing what they made of the arctic incident. Seriously, brushing it off the way they did was simply too much for me to enjoy the light-hearted atmosphere anymore...the whole north sea nude video thing was the last drop-i stopped watching after that.

Anyways! Liked the premise of the story, a little too sudden in the separations for my tastes (i really dislike the canon pairingsof this series, so reading about them self-destructing is often one of my guilty pleasures), but overall a good setting for more interesting stuff, so good job and thanks for sharing!

so love your work because it brings me such joy in watching L/A get theirs. it is like reading a Buffy turning the table on her crew. There is a great story idea for you, put buffy in the good. I think Sheldon and Buffy would be would funny together. .

Fiction is fiction and how hard is that to understand! It sounds like this SheldonH8tsShenny lived in their make a believe world like Leonard does!

I love this story and all of your stories on this account. I've spent today reading all of your stories and I think they're fantastic. I'm usually a big Shenny fan but your fanfics have made me appreciate one's that don't always have a shenny ending. I've never liked Amy and Leonard anyway and I love how they get put in place in your fanfics. Thank you for being a fantastic writer :)

What a superb story. You truly are one of the royalty of shennyland. Thanks so much

A good one

Hah... I can totally see this. I never really liked Amy and I always felt that Leonard wasn't right for Penny.