cute

This was so cute. I really hope you do a sequel to Island Time. I loved that story and you are a great writer. I know it will be great.

well if you don't wanna f up a good thing then don't make a sequel, the majority of times people just wish they'd stopped at one.

as for this story, i thought it was adorable, especially the way fang was so in love with his children, it was just to sweet! only one complaint: YOU KILLED TOTAL, YOU CAN'T JUST KILL TOTAL LIKE THAT! although i suppose it only makes sense, i mean it's not like he's immortal... or is he! :)

aww this was nice!